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Narrative: Family and Graphic Organizer Assignment
Assignment: Planning a Narrative Essay (30 points)
To plan your own narrative essay, complete this graphic organizer assignment:
I. Pre-Writing: Finding Your Subject (Possibilities-- Brainstorming, Mapping, Outlining, Your Own
Creation)

1.When I first left Kansas, to go to Los Angeles.
2. The day I met my first famous person.
3. First time I rode a plane.

II. Establish a problem or conflict for the narrative essay.

-Living is very expensive.
-Staying in a Shelter.
-All the crime around.

III. Thesis Statement: This should be your plan for the guiding sentence that reveals the theme in your narrative essay.

This story is about the first time I left, my little city/home in Kansas.

IV. Introduction to the Essay (should include your thesis statement):

The first time I left Kansas I rode on a plane for the very first time, was 11 yrs old and very excited, and scared.

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V. Support for Body Paragraph One

The first time I got on a plane I was very excited and scared, at the same time. I was eleven yrs old at the time, so it was a very intense couple of hrs for me. When I looked out the window three hrs later, I seen the huge city I was so excited, because when we were leaving Kansas it was or look so tiny from up in the air. Whlie we were landing, my ears started popping. My mom gives me a piece of gum and says to chew it that it will stop the popping,and what do you know it worked.

VI. Support for Body Paragraph Two

As soon as we laded, and walking off the plane I see three giant letters, the 1st thing i noticed (L.A.X). I thought they were very pretty letters is what I told my mom. So as we make are way to my tias (aunts) house it starts to get dark, I realize the weather is different from Kansas.

VII. Conclusion

As me, my mom, and my big sister look at the stars, theres a breeze from the ocean, but the floor outside was ex-termly hot. Even though it was expensive and, lots of crime we made

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