Narrative Essay: Motivation In America

We’re on the lookout for food. We’re starving -- literally starving. We are always going to this person's house and trying to get food. Ethan, Brecken, Brady. Billy and I are looking for food. We have seen the humans go into that house. Since we have not been eating we are really skinny and boney.
We are really hungry so when we sneak up on the pray we can not howl or make any noises.
There is four of use and then we can try and get into the house. We gotta make a plan, Brady you try and break the window to get in. Ethan you go at the door and scratch at the door, if something happens to Brady Ethan you will take his spot.
Brecken and I will stay back until something goes really bad and billy will just go in last to try and get the humans. We will sneak up and then attack. All of a sudden we hear a lady start to yell. Then that’s when we started our attack. Brady go to the window, Ethan you go the door.
We all back up and then we wait like minute and then Ethan goes up to the window.
Ethan starts attacking the door scratching it. Nothing was happening so Ethan went to the window and started attacking the window like Brady did. Ethan was attacking the window and then all we heard was a another two loud bangs and Ethan dropped to the floor