My Writing To Shame Analysis
Your personal statement was amazing and after reading it I must say you put my writing to shame. It is clear that you are a strong writer and everything you said especially, “I want to be up in front of a room of hungry eyes” were great choices. It shows off your passion of being able to teach students on how to grow and love to write. By that sentence alone you not only described your passion, but as a reader who hates to write. It really made me think maybe he can resolve the hatred people have towards writing. Overall, you created a very humble and positive voice throughout you paper. It described your love to help others and help change a stigma towards writing, but also that you are dedicated enough to take on all the challenges of graduate