My Dream Vacation
AKIVA RAMGEET ENGLISH 11 SAT EASSY PREPG
REVISION
ASSIGNMENT: SHOULD PEOPLE MAKE MORE OF AN EFFORT TO KEEP SOME THINGS PRIVATE?
PEOPLE SHOULD MAKE MORE OF AN EFFORT TO KEEP THEIR LIFE PRIVATE. FOR EXAMPLE WHEN YOU SEE SOME PEOPLE ON TWITTER POSTING ABOUT THEM EVERYDAY LIFE. I DO NOT THINK WE NEED TO KNOW THAT ISN’T THEM TRULY EXPRESSING THEMSELVES HOWEVER THAT SEEMS TO BE WHAT THEY THINK ARE DOING. BUT OTHER THEN THAT I THINK PEOPLE SHOULD KEEP THERE PERSONALY LIFE SPAM TO THEMSELVES CAUSE IT CAN GO OUT THERE INTO THE WORLD AND THEN THAT’S HOW KILLING YOUR SELF HAPPEN AND PEOPLE FIGTING AND HURTING EACH OTHER. I LEARNED THAT IF U HAVE A FRIEND A REALLY CLOSE ONE AND YOU FEEL DOWN AND WANT TO TALK IT OUT WITH HIM OR HER ITS BEST TO TELL AN ADULT WHO CAN SAVE YOUR LIFE RATHER THEN TELLING YOUR CLOSE BEST FRIEND THAT MIGHT TELL EVERYONE OR USE IT AGINST YOU WHEN YALL FALL OUT LATER ON IN THE FUTURE.
AS I YOUNG STUDENT IN A 11 GRADE I AM WRITING THIS TO ALL THE YOUNG TEENS GIRLS, STOP PUTTING YOUR SELF OUT THERE ON FACEBOOK AND OTHER APPS THAT PEOPLE CAN SEE AND COMMENT ON IT. ITS BEST TO NOT SHOW THEN SHOW WHAT U HAVE,. ITS BEST IF U KEEP HOW U FEEL AND TELL AN ADULT RATHER SHOW HOW YOU FEEL TO THE WORLD. KEEP YOUR PRIVATE THINGS TO YOUR SELF AND BEST TO BBELIVE YOU WILL BE BETTER OFF.
GORVENMEANT PRIVATES IS NOT THE BEST THING YOU CAN SAY IN THIS WORLD. ONE THE LAW IS EVERYTHING YOU DO PEOPLE HAVE TO KNOW FOR EXAMPLE JOHN BACK DID SOMETHING REALLY BAD. HE TOOK SOME FOOD FROM THE STORE THAT WAS COST $20. IF HE HAD THE MONEY I KNOW HE WOULD OF BUY IT. BUT THEN AGAIN JOHN BACK IS A VERY POOR MAN WITH A WIFE AND 3 KIDS. AS YOU KNOW SOMEONE SAW HIM AND CALLED THE POLICE. HE WAS TOOKEN TO JAIL AND HAD TO SPEND 4 MONTHS IN JAILS JUST FOR STEALING FOOD TO TAKE HOME TO HIS FAMILY. WELL LATER ON YOU THINK EVERYTHING IS OKAY AND YOU HEAR ON TV OR THE NEWS HI TODAY IS 09/20/14 A MAN NAME JOHN BACKS STOLED $20 WORTH OF FOOD TO TAKE HOME TO HIS FAMILY. WHAT I
REVISION
ASSIGNMENT: SHOULD PEOPLE MAKE MORE OF AN EFFORT TO KEEP SOME THINGS PRIVATE?
PEOPLE SHOULD MAKE MORE OF AN EFFORT TO KEEP THEIR LIFE PRIVATE. FOR EXAMPLE WHEN YOU SEE SOME PEOPLE ON TWITTER POSTING ABOUT THEM EVERYDAY LIFE. I DO NOT THINK WE NEED TO KNOW THAT ISN’T THEM TRULY EXPRESSING THEMSELVES HOWEVER THAT SEEMS TO BE WHAT THEY THINK ARE DOING. BUT OTHER THEN THAT I THINK PEOPLE SHOULD KEEP THERE PERSONALY LIFE SPAM TO THEMSELVES CAUSE IT CAN GO OUT THERE INTO THE WORLD AND THEN THAT’S HOW KILLING YOUR SELF HAPPEN AND PEOPLE FIGTING AND HURTING EACH OTHER. I LEARNED THAT IF U HAVE A FRIEND A REALLY CLOSE ONE AND YOU FEEL DOWN AND WANT TO TALK IT OUT WITH HIM OR HER ITS BEST TO TELL AN ADULT WHO CAN SAVE YOUR LIFE RATHER THEN TELLING YOUR CLOSE BEST FRIEND THAT MIGHT TELL EVERYONE OR USE IT AGINST YOU WHEN YALL FALL OUT LATER ON IN THE FUTURE.
AS I YOUNG STUDENT IN A 11 GRADE I AM WRITING THIS TO ALL THE YOUNG TEENS GIRLS, STOP PUTTING YOUR SELF OUT THERE ON FACEBOOK AND OTHER APPS THAT PEOPLE CAN SEE AND COMMENT ON IT. ITS BEST TO NOT SHOW THEN SHOW WHAT U HAVE,. ITS BEST IF U KEEP HOW U FEEL AND TELL AN ADULT RATHER SHOW HOW YOU FEEL TO THE WORLD. KEEP YOUR PRIVATE THINGS TO YOUR SELF AND BEST TO BBELIVE YOU WILL BE BETTER OFF.
GORVENMEANT PRIVATES IS NOT THE BEST THING YOU CAN SAY IN THIS WORLD. ONE THE LAW IS EVERYTHING YOU DO PEOPLE HAVE TO KNOW FOR EXAMPLE JOHN BACK DID SOMETHING REALLY BAD. HE TOOK SOME FOOD FROM THE STORE THAT WAS COST $20. IF HE HAD THE MONEY I KNOW HE WOULD OF BUY IT. BUT THEN AGAIN JOHN BACK IS A VERY POOR MAN WITH A WIFE AND 3 KIDS. AS YOU KNOW SOMEONE SAW HIM AND CALLED THE POLICE. HE WAS TOOKEN TO JAIL AND HAD TO SPEND 4 MONTHS IN JAILS JUST FOR STEALING FOOD TO TAKE HOME TO HIS FAMILY. WELL LATER ON YOU THINK EVERYTHING IS OKAY AND YOU HEAR ON TV OR THE NEWS HI TODAY IS 09/20/14 A MAN NAME JOHN BACKS STOLED $20 WORTH OF FOOD TO TAKE HOME TO HIS FAMILY. WHAT I