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Multicultural Psychology Paper [This title could be more inspiring. Labeling it a "paper" or an "essay" is redundant (what else could it be?), and only a few words as a title are not very explanatory (or intriguing to the reader). An ideal title has between six and a dozen words ]
PSYCH/535
[If this is a city and state combination, the sentence is referring to the city. The state name is additional, nonrestrictive information, to be surrounded by commas (and do not abbreviate the state)] Ph.D.
January 26, 2013
Definition [Make sure paragraph indentation is five to seven spaces or one tab stop] of Multicultural Psychology Cultural psychology is defined [The passive voice is a form of "be" (is) and a participle (defined). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Prefer the active voice. For example, passive voice = The paper was completed on time.
Multicultural Psychology Paper [This title could be more inspiring. Labeling it a "paper" or an "essay" is redundant (what else could it be?), and only a few words as a title are not very explanatory (or intriguing to the reader). An ideal title has between six and a dozen words ]
PSYCH/535
[If this is a city and state combination, the sentence is referring to the city. The state name is additional, nonrestrictive information, to be surrounded by commas (and do not abbreviate the state)] Ph.D.
January 26, 2013
Definition [Make sure paragraph indentation is five to seven spaces or one tab stop] of Multicultural Psychology Cultural psychology is defined [The passive voice is a form of "be" (is) and a participle (defined). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Prefer the active voice. For example, passive voice = The paper was completed on time.
References: Hall, F. C. N. (2010). Multicultural psychology (2nd ed.). Upper Saddle River, NJ: Pearson/Prentice Hall. Hook, J. N., Davis, D. E., (2012). Integration, multicultural counseling, and social justice. Journal of Psychology & Theology, Vol. 40, No. 2, 102-106. Reid, P. T., (2002). Multicultural psychology: bringing together gender and ethnicity. Cultural diversity and ethnic minority psychology, Vol. 8, No. 2, 103-114. Sue, D. W., Bernier, J. E., Durran, A., Feinberg, L., Pedersen, P., Smith, E. J., & Vasquez-Nutall, E. (1982). Position paper: Cross-cultural counseling competencies. The counseling psychologist, 10, 45-52.