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My portfolio contains three essays carefully constructed to match the specifications outlined by my professor. The topic of our class centered around freedoms and boundaries in the Wild West. Correspondingly, the three essays focused on the individual aspects of this relationship; the first related to religion in the West, the second dealt with gender in the West, and the third revolved around criminality in the West. Specifically, I focused my essays on Mormonism, Prostitution, and Billy “the Kid.” My personal writing style, just like everyone else’s, has its particular strengths and weaknesses. It is apparent in my portfolio that I demonstrate a mastery of transitional word phrases/sentence beginnings and vocabulary; I frequently use “Consequently”

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