Mission Statement Analysis: Human Services Benefits Company

The mission statements information should be portrayed clear and concisely. A mission statements sole purpose is to describe the company, their goals, and their employees. When a mission statement is not written correctly the readers might get confused or be disinterested in the business. This could lead to financial difficulties because people do not want to put money into something they might not understand. A mission statement can be viewed different ways if not written properly which means simple errors can lead to misinterpretation. The statement should have enough information to describe the organization but not too much to over whelm the employees or possible customers.

The first mission statement I viewed was from the Human Services Benefits Company. Human Services Benefits Company 's philosophy is to provide unsurpassed customer services to all of our clients. We achieve our goals and those of our customers by specializing in insurance services and products specifically designed for human service organizations. We encourage active participation, which will
What they intend to do is stated clearly but it does not go into much detail which would be better for financing for the intended projects. This statement should be rethought and written to persuade people of their cause. This statement could be a guide for an even better one to be made, the better the statement the better the representation. This statement does not show what the clientele is or should be it talks about client but not which ones. The mission for this business is clearly stated which is to promote cost-effective services, which safeguard the physical, emotional, and social well being of the people of Solano County (Solano County Health and Social Services). The final item is the mission statement does not describe what the business does or what it stands