Millennials Thesis Statement

In my essay about Millennials, I could have strengthened my thesis by using the “because” clause. My thesis was, “The Millennial generation have developed to be more spoiled than older generations.” This sentence is only a claim and not a thesis because it lacked reasons to support it. In order to make it a more valid thesis, I could have utilized the “because” clause which would allow me to introduce the main points of my essay. The argument was not fully developed and lacked a deeper explanation. According to the handout, “The Three-Part Thesis Statement,” the author states that, the "because" clause is “the key to the organization of an essay: it introduces the two or three major reasons that support the thesis” (Weidenbach 1). Supporting