She sets up the scene for a place called the Castro located in San Francisco, which is a key location for her essay where most of the violence she describes takes place. The way she sets up the scene in San Francisco enables the reader to picture the way Castro looks if they have not been there before. She describes what the homophobic people are doing as a type of “fun.” This implies they do not see any harm in the actions they are making. Her quoting the obscene use of name calling they use such as “fucking cocksucking faggots”, “dyke cunts”, and “diseased butt fuckers” takes readers back for a moment, making them think “who would use this language toward another person?” (Blumenfeld 490). She incorporates the use of pathos as she includes these phrases to show the reader the strong language and the emotional damage the people of the LGBTQ community are suffering
She sets up the scene for a place called the Castro located in San Francisco, which is a key location for her essay where most of the violence she describes takes place. The way she sets up the scene in San Francisco enables the reader to picture the way Castro looks if they have not been there before. She describes what the homophobic people are doing as a type of “fun.” This implies they do not see any harm in the actions they are making. Her quoting the obscene use of name calling they use such as “fucking cocksucking faggots”, “dyke cunts”, and “diseased butt fuckers” takes readers back for a moment, making them think “who would use this language toward another person?” (Blumenfeld 490). She incorporates the use of pathos as she includes these phrases to show the reader the strong language and the emotional damage the people of the LGBTQ community are suffering