Leohn Diary Analysis
RATIONALE
I wrote a diary about Bernard and his feelings for Lenina in the World State. It was written with an informal tone and hopes to address the school student’s audience.
In my diary, I tried to use informal phrases like “I feel bad, worse than ever”, “I´m angry and frustrated” and “I´m tired and I need to sleep”. I tried as well to use an easy level of vocabulary with word choices like “beautiful” and “emotion” for the people to understand clearly what I want to express. By using these elements, I feel that I reached my purpose, which is that Bernard expresses everything he feels about the World State. A world where people is separated in castes, babies are born from machines, people consume every day a drug called soma, and have orgies …show more content…
At first, I was jealous, because Lenina seemed to be very interested in him, but after a conversation we had I felt we both shared the isolated feeling from our respective cultures. John told us everything about how life was in the village and that if we want to become natives we have to pass through several rituals, but in spite of all the happiness that exists there John told us that he feels that he doesn’t belong to that place. I told him about utopia and he felt very interested in this place. He wants me to take him and his mother Linda with me back to utopia. I need to put my ideas in order, so later I will tell you what I´m going to …show more content…
Because I´m back in Utopia, with Linda and John. They are very interested in all what they see, I showed them all the place, I wanted then to feel comfortable. I`m concern with Linda she is anxious to meet her lover again and he is going to be surprised, because they have their own story, and I don’t know what is going happen when all the people find out that the director of a society that forbids feelings and having children, has one. At the same time, John thinks that Utopia is a fantastic place, another world but he doesn’t know what awaits him, and I´m afraid he will be very disappointed and will wish to never have come and would want to disappear and lived away, from this world without values and
I wrote a diary about Bernard and his feelings for Lenina in the World State. It was written with an informal tone and hopes to address the school student’s audience.
In my diary, I tried to use informal phrases like “I feel bad, worse than ever”, “I´m angry and frustrated” and “I´m tired and I need to sleep”. I tried as well to use an easy level of vocabulary with word choices like “beautiful” and “emotion” for the people to understand clearly what I want to express. By using these elements, I feel that I reached my purpose, which is that Bernard expresses everything he feels about the World State. A world where people is separated in castes, babies are born from machines, people consume every day a drug called soma, and have orgies …show more content…
At first, I was jealous, because Lenina seemed to be very interested in him, but after a conversation we had I felt we both shared the isolated feeling from our respective cultures. John told us everything about how life was in the village and that if we want to become natives we have to pass through several rituals, but in spite of all the happiness that exists there John told us that he feels that he doesn’t belong to that place. I told him about utopia and he felt very interested in this place. He wants me to take him and his mother Linda with me back to utopia. I need to put my ideas in order, so later I will tell you what I´m going to …show more content…
Because I´m back in Utopia, with Linda and John. They are very interested in all what they see, I showed them all the place, I wanted then to feel comfortable. I`m concern with Linda she is anxious to meet her lover again and he is going to be surprised, because they have their own story, and I don’t know what is going happen when all the people find out that the director of a society that forbids feelings and having children, has one. At the same time, John thinks that Utopia is a fantastic place, another world but he doesn’t know what awaits him, and I´m afraid he will be very disappointed and will wish to never have come and would want to disappear and lived away, from this world without values and