Kasha Review

University of Phoenix Material
Jassen Lopez
8 January 2015
COM/295
Dion Williams

New Hire Communication Classmate Review

Use the table below to review the New Hire Communication assignment for the team member assigned to you by your instructor. Indicate whether each item is met, partially met, or not met and include specific feedback in the Comments column.

Content
80 Percent
Met

Partially Met
Not Met

Comments:
Paper communicates the selected company culture, process, procedures, and general information for a new hire.

X

It could of given a little information about the company a little more of what they have to offer.
Paper defines the purpose of the communication.
X

I really liked how you put you were the new hire and why they were writing you.
Paper defines the audience.
X

It does that perfectly, stating who the new hire was.
Paper indicates the selected channel(s) for communication along with rationale for selecting the channel(s).
X

To my understanding I think you used selected channel for communication.
Writing Guidelines
20 Percent
Met

Partially Met
Not Met

Comments:
Paragraph and sentence transitions are present, logical, and maintain the flow throughout the paper.
X

You did your sentences were in order and the paragraphs went well together.
Sentences are complete, clear, and concise. Rules of grammar and usage are followed including spelling and punctuation.
X

I really liked your wording, and how it was worded perfectly.

Additional comments:
Your letter was a very warm welcoming letter, the best part of the letter was how you said the direct supervisor was welcomed to meet you during the meeting you were going to have. The only thing I didn’t see and thought I would have seen was contact information. Only because you wrote if you were available and not actually stating a time or date. But that is only my opinion and it’s not necessarily needed.