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Jayden's Narrative-What Doesn T Brake?
It all started when Jayden and asked Gary to ride his fourwheeler thinking he was going to say no you could imagine our surprise when he said “go for it”. We instantly jumped on and took off, at first we took it easy not going to fast but fast enough we were having fun. We were all over town. We almost rolled once when Jayden turned a corner to fast and we went up on 2 wheels, jayden and i both leaned the right way causing us to go back down on all four wheels. After drive for a little while longer jayden finally gave in to my persistent nagging and let me be the driver. We took off still going easy and decided we should go check in. when we got back to the house we asked if we could go back out and he told us we could Gary looked at us and said “ do a wheelie ya pussies”. …show more content…
As we were driving around we found this rock hill and we hit the hill a few time going up getting a little bounce and coming back down the other side never really leaving the ground. It started to get dark and i convinced jayden to let me hit the hill one more time but with some more speed than the last times. I came around the corner and instantly gassed it as i press on the gass i hear jayden shout “ slow down” i instantly start to brake a little but before I know it we are at he top of the hill and the wheels leave the ground. As we make contact with the ground everything goes black and jayden jumps off mid air but i help on. I was knocked unconscious when my face bounced off te front of the 4-wheeler. Jayden jumped off the back in mid air. When i came back to all I remember is trying to push the fourwheeler off of me. Jayden runs over and rocks it enough that i can slide out most of the, she goes to put it down and it's right on my chest so she lifts it again and i jump

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