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How To Write A Short Story: Detective Dean's Room
It was a Thursday morning when a jogger, out on an early morning run, was forced to take a detour into an alley behind a clinic. Just as the jogger was about to turn in to an adjoining street, she saw a red-stained lump of fabric. The jogger stepped towards it, slowly reached out ,and took the fabric by a clean corner. Peeling it back, a frightful sight greeted her. Before her eyes was a horrific scene of a bloody, lifeless, shirtless male. The strangest feature though, was the strange blade in his chest.
YEEEEAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH
Detective Dean Winchester desperatley needed a cup of coffee this morning. There had been a series of robberies in the precinct's area and earlier today a civilian claimed to have seen the culprit. When the detective
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"I'm sorry, say what?"
Ellen rolled her eyes. "CSI's found a note jammed down the throat of the vic. Captian thinks that the perp will strike again soon."
"What'd the note say?"
Ellen put up her hands in defeat. "Don't ask me, only authorized personell on the case have clearance."
Dean and Ellen shared a look. Quickly, Ellen shuffled to the side as Dean walked at a fast pace to the Captain's office.
Dean almost broke down the door to Capt. Robert Singer's office in a desperate attempt for the case assignment. Just as he barged in, Bobby finished a phone call and was putting down the phone.
"Bobby!" Dean exclaimed. "I need that case!"
Bobby just looked at Dean. "What case?"
"You know, the potential serial on 83rd."
"Oh that case." Bobby said sarcastically. "In that case: no!"
"What do you mean no?" Dean cried out while putting up both of his arms in a large, questioning shrug.
"Until you get along with your partner, I am letting you nowhere near a potential high-profile case such as this
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It was all over the news that he was delivering meals to the local less-fortunate families! And all you had to do was go and get sandwiches for the department!" Bobby was in full dad mode with his hands crossed over his chest.
"Is this all because you're still pissed that you said no pickle and the sandwich had extra pickles on it? I swear Bobby, it was her who ordered it!" Dean put his hands up in defense.
"No I'm not still mad about the pickles. However, when a man says no pickles on his sandwhich, he means no pickles." Bobby sighed and them took a deep breath. "Listen I would love to give you this case, I really would. But I can't have you on a case that might involve higher authorities if you and your partner can't get along!"
"Look, I offered an olive branch. She burned it just like she burned down that tree in the park."
"She only burned it down because you pranked her while she was smoking!" Just as Bobby sat at his desk, Dean gave him an attempted puppy-dog look. Bobby stared at him dead straight (or not;)) in the eye. "If you screw this up in any way, you will be on desk duty for month."
Dean jumped and put his hands up in celebration, "Bobby you are the best!" He went up to the captains desk and give him a

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