Graduate Study Challenges and Strategies for Success
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Graduate Study Challenges and Strategies for Success
Mark Baravik
HCS/504
September 3rd, 2010
Jill Grundy
Graduate Study Challenges and Strategies for Success
Graduate education is a decision, which must not be taken lightly. It [Reword – Do not begin a sentence with the word “it”.] is an important goal I took after; I had to understand all plusses and minuses of this exiting journey. Decisions should be made after serious consideration of personal and professional goals (Kramer, 2007). Graduate education involves in it itself multiple challenges, which require an individual to come up with strategies to overcome this problems to succeed. Some of the obstacles that I may anticipate while completing my education are: difficulties with family especially children, work, and procrastination. [Good introduction.] [Level 1 heading missing.] Family is a challenge of an emotional kind. These There [spelling error] are most important people in my life, [remove comma] for whom I want to give everything I can: better school or daycare, clothing, house, life [Add comma (Use commas between items in a series. Place a comma before "and" in a series)] and so on. In my culture [Add comma (Use a comma to set off most introductory elements)] people say that if a child has a better life than a parent than the parent’s life was not wasted. In addition [insert comma] higher education in nursing is an expensive commodity, but it already brought lots of happiness and success to my life, [Use period instead of a comma.] I look for ward forward [spelling error] to learning and growing with my family. Family is very demanding part of my life, around which it revolves. So the challenge is: how would steel [unclear] be there for them and keep my educational obligations. When I was about to apply to the FNP [Use abbreviations only after writing
Graduate Study Challenges and Strategies for Success
Mark Baravik
HCS/504
September 3rd, 2010
Jill Grundy
Graduate Study Challenges and Strategies for Success
Graduate education is a decision, which must not be taken lightly. It [Reword – Do not begin a sentence with the word “it”.] is an important goal I took after; I had to understand all plusses and minuses of this exiting journey. Decisions should be made after serious consideration of personal and professional goals (Kramer, 2007). Graduate education involves in it itself multiple challenges, which require an individual to come up with strategies to overcome this problems to succeed. Some of the obstacles that I may anticipate while completing my education are: difficulties with family especially children, work, and procrastination. [Good introduction.] [Level 1 heading missing.] Family is a challenge of an emotional kind. These There [spelling error] are most important people in my life, [remove comma] for whom I want to give everything I can: better school or daycare, clothing, house, life [Add comma (Use commas between items in a series. Place a comma before "and" in a series)] and so on. In my culture [Add comma (Use a comma to set off most introductory elements)] people say that if a child has a better life than a parent than the parent’s life was not wasted. In addition [insert comma] higher education in nursing is an expensive commodity, but it already brought lots of happiness and success to my life, [Use period instead of a comma.] I look for ward forward [spelling error] to learning and growing with my family. Family is very demanding part of my life, around which it revolves. So the challenge is: how would steel [unclear] be there for them and keep my educational obligations. When I was about to apply to the FNP [Use abbreviations only after writing
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