Game and Good Communication Skills

TOPIC : People have become overly dependent on technology.
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GENERAL STATEMENT
- Nowadays,people have become overly dependent on technology to do everything.For example,when they are working,studying or going somewhere.
THESIS STATEMENT
- People have become overly dependent on technology due to the various impact of these technology people has become more lazy,they often to play computer games rather than playing outside with their friends and they will not have a good communication skills.
PARAGRAPH 2
1.TOPIC SENTENCES - People has become more lazy.
2.SUPPORTING DETAILS -Technology can do their daily routine. -They only need to open ipad,laptop or television to watch news. -They did not have go for shopping anymore because they can do online shopping.
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1.TOPIC SENTENCES - People often to play computer games rather than playing outside with their friends.
2.SUPPORTING DETAILS -Computer games make them addicted. -They also can play online computer games with their friends. -They do not feel tired when play computer games.
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1.TOPIC SENTENCES - People will not have a good communication skills.
2.SUPPORTING DETAILS -They only sit infront of the computer and did not socialize with other people. -They rely on their phone or computer to talk to one another. -They will feel awkward when at crowded place or meet someone.
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CONCLUSION
I agree that dependent to much on technology has made people become more lazy, they often to play computer games rather than playing outs with their friends and they will not have a good communication