English Short Story Draft
Night
Camille Steeprock
On Halloween night, Kelly was with her friends Ally, Kayla, Rena, Olivia,
Emma, and Rachel trickortreating on Martins Lane. Kelly and her friends started up the driveway towards their next house when her friend Ally spoke up and said,
“Before we all have to go home, I want to go egging!”
Everybody broke out into laughter because they didn’t think she could be serious. They would get into a lot of trouble if they did go egging. Ally looked at all of them confused. They all stopped laughing.
“What’s so funny?” Ally said after all the laughing died down.
“You can’t be serious Ally, if we get caught..” Olivia said stopping to think of all of the things that could go wrong if they did go egging.
“That’s why we’re not going to get caught” replied Ally.
“Fine, let’s do this then.” Kelly said.
“You in?” Ally said to their twin friends, Rena and Kayla.
“Yeah, sure.” They said in unison.
“Wait, where are we going to get the eggs?” said Olivia.
They all looked at each other.
“Hmm, how about we just steal some eggs from the towns dining hall?”
Ally said.
“What if the doors are locked? What will we do then?” Kayla spoke up.
“Then we would climb in the windows, they are always unlocked during the summer because of how hot it is outside!”Ally shouted with excitement because she knew she was right.
“Oh yeah that’s right,” Kayla said.
“Alright then, I hope you’re right” Rena says.
“What are we waiting for, we should head up there now since the diner is at the top of the hill,” Ally says to the girls as they start to walk up the hill to the diner. “If one of us gets caught or something, we can’t say names or anything.
Just in case, okay guys?” Kelly said to them.
All the girls nodded their heads in agreement to what Kelly told them.
The girls finally reached the top of the hill, the diner was just down the road. “Okay, here’s the plan for now. I’ll take Kayla and Kelly with me to the back of the diner. I’ll lift Kelly
Camille Steeprock
On Halloween night, Kelly was with her friends Ally, Kayla, Rena, Olivia,
Emma, and Rachel trickortreating on Martins Lane. Kelly and her friends started up the driveway towards their next house when her friend Ally spoke up and said,
“Before we all have to go home, I want to go egging!”
Everybody broke out into laughter because they didn’t think she could be serious. They would get into a lot of trouble if they did go egging. Ally looked at all of them confused. They all stopped laughing.
“What’s so funny?” Ally said after all the laughing died down.
“You can’t be serious Ally, if we get caught..” Olivia said stopping to think of all of the things that could go wrong if they did go egging.
“That’s why we’re not going to get caught” replied Ally.
“Fine, let’s do this then.” Kelly said.
“You in?” Ally said to their twin friends, Rena and Kayla.
“Yeah, sure.” They said in unison.
“Wait, where are we going to get the eggs?” said Olivia.
They all looked at each other.
“Hmm, how about we just steal some eggs from the towns dining hall?”
Ally said.
“What if the doors are locked? What will we do then?” Kayla spoke up.
“Then we would climb in the windows, they are always unlocked during the summer because of how hot it is outside!”Ally shouted with excitement because she knew she was right.
“Oh yeah that’s right,” Kayla said.
“Alright then, I hope you’re right” Rena says.
“What are we waiting for, we should head up there now since the diner is at the top of the hill,” Ally says to the girls as they start to walk up the hill to the diner. “If one of us gets caught or something, we can’t say names or anything.
Just in case, okay guys?” Kelly said to them.
All the girls nodded their heads in agreement to what Kelly told them.
The girls finally reached the top of the hill, the diner was just down the road. “Okay, here’s the plan for now. I’ll take Kayla and Kelly with me to the back of the diner. I’ll lift Kelly