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Ok but for the first intro paragraph does this sound good ? ; imagine that one bad decision you made took away an innocent persons life , How would you feel ? It's never ok to drunk drive. Drunk driving is a crime of driving a vehicle with a large amount of alcohol in your blood stream. Drunk driving could lead to many deaths. It's is also dangerous because it slows down the drivers brain cause them to take risks. That's all I got is it good ???? Therefor it's bad to drink and drive many deaths. It's is also dangerous because it slows down the drivers brain cause them to take risks. That's all I got is it good ????many deaths. It's is also dangerous because it slows down the drivers brain cause them to take risks. That's all I got is it good ????many deaths. It's is also dangerous because it slows down the drivers brain cause them to take risks. That's all I got is it good ????many deaths. It's is also dangerous because it slows down the drivers brain cause them to take risks. That's all I got is it good ????Ok but for the first intro paragraph does this sound good ? ; imagine that one bad decision you made took away an innocent persons life , How would you feel ? It's never ok to drunk drive. Drunk driving is a crime of driving a vehicle with a large amount of alcohol in your blood stream. Drunk driving could lead to many deaths. It's is also dangerous because it slows down the drivers brain cause them to take risks. That's all I got is it good ???? Therefor it's bad to drink and drive many deaths. It's is also dangerous because it slows down the drivers brain cause them to take risks. That's all I got is it good ????many deaths. It's is also dangerous because it slows down the drivers brain cause them to take risks. That's all I got is it good ????many deaths. It's is also dangerous because it slows down the drivers brain cause them to take risks. That's all I got is it good ????many deaths. It's is also dangerous because it slows down the drivers brain cause

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