Depression and Hyperhidrosis
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Russell Mercado
Comparison and Contrast – Depression and Hyperhidrosis
Teenage depression is a common problem in today’s society and is often a major factor for numerous teenager problems. Depression is caused by many things, for example, Hyperhidrosis. Hyperhidrosis affects many teenagers which may be a contributing factor to one’s depression. Hyperhidrosis and Depression have been commonly linked together that Hyperhidrosis has been a cause for Depression, but there are ways to fight Depression and treatments to help Hyperhidrosis.
What is Depression? [Writing suggestion: Unless in a quote or a title, avoid rhetorical questions in academic writing. A good idea is to provide answers, not questions] Many people view Depression as being [Doctoral rule (but good advice for any academic writer)--If not a noun (as in "human being"), the word "Being" is hard to imagine; it means "existing." Try to rewrite this without using "being"--with action words like "attending," "working," "living," "experiencing," simply "as"--or even removing "being" completely] in a state of sadness. Depression is not only a state of being sad; it is a disease that conquers the ability to feel any emotion, whether good or bad, whatsoever. While Depression may involve the mind, but it also involves the body and thoughts. When in a state of being depressed, we tend to think sadness which may sometimes lead to
Russell Mercado
Comparison and Contrast – Depression and Hyperhidrosis
Teenage depression is a common problem in today’s society and is often a major factor for numerous teenager problems. Depression is caused by many things, for example, Hyperhidrosis. Hyperhidrosis affects many teenagers which may be a contributing factor to one’s depression. Hyperhidrosis and Depression have been commonly linked together that Hyperhidrosis has been a cause for Depression, but there are ways to fight Depression and treatments to help Hyperhidrosis.
What is Depression? [Writing suggestion: Unless in a quote or a title, avoid rhetorical questions in academic writing. A good idea is to provide answers, not questions] Many people view Depression as being [Doctoral rule (but good advice for any academic writer)--If not a noun (as in "human being"), the word "Being" is hard to imagine; it means "existing." Try to rewrite this without using "being"--with action words like "attending," "working," "living," "experiencing," simply "as"--or even removing "being" completely] in a state of sadness. Depression is not only a state of being sad; it is a disease that conquers the ability to feel any emotion, whether good or bad, whatsoever. While Depression may involve the mind, but it also involves the body and thoughts. When in a state of being depressed, we tend to think sadness which may sometimes lead to