Creative Writing: The Three Little Alpacas

The Three Little Alpacas
Once upon a time in a world where rabid squirrels viciously eat alpacas, three little alpacas sleepily woke up to terrible news. They were outgrowing their mother's’ home and were forced to build their own. Normally their mother was a very kind person and accepting of others, but she was getting tired of a cramped house.
“I'm sorry to do this but I’m going to have to make you leave. You are too old for my care and too big for this house.”
“When you leave be careful of the rabid squirrels, because they will try to eat you and destroy your house.”
The three alpacas named John, Jamal, and Hermes were on their way down a long dark road. Along the road the three alpacas met a man carrying paper.
“Can I have some of
Only having three legs didn’t bother him much, but when building a house he was very limited. Johns’ house turned out to be a one room small cottage with a fence and a gate. He wasn't able to make a farm of a well for food or water so he relied on neighbors for necessities. Jamal's construction went a lot smoother. He was able to use his solid gold to make a four room villa with a watch tower, alarm, and a solid gold fence. Jamal was also clueless, he didn't understand that not patching holes in his walls would give the squirrels an advantage. He was aware of his surroundings and very careful with where he put things. Little Hermes construction was the best of them all. He had a 14 bedroom mansion with four guard towers, an army of tanks and spiked walls. Hermes was very cautious of his house and always kept it in amazing shape, making his the most fortified. On a dark rainy day John was making a tuna sandwich when he heard a scratching noise on his door. He turned around as his whole house was ripped to shreds by a giant rabid squirrel. Thinking as fast as he could he sprinted out to his garage, hopped in his paper airplane and flew to his brother Jamal's house. Along the way he saw a giant pack of rabid squirrels heading towards Jamal’s house. He landed after about ten long minutes of gliding towards
Hermes was out in his garden when he heard an unusually loud noise roar from the right wall. He ran to the wall when he saw the crack. A squirrel had torn off a spike leaving a giant seam in the wall. The sad part was that this was a distraction, the squirrels were digging a tunnel underneath Hermes’ farm and needed him to leave the area so he wouldn’t know. Right when he turned around he was eaten whole. The squirrels then stormed the mansion eating the two alpacas and ending the adventure. The mother never knew about the disaster as she was eaten two days later by the same rabid squirrel. She was walking to Hermes house when she saw the disaster, she saw the broken walls, the destroyed house, and worst of all her kids blood everywhere. She thought back to the point when her kids where still living with her, regretting ever kicking them out. In a deep train of thoughts a squirrel snuck up and swallowed her