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The squealing of the tires around me is not a pretty noise; most will find it obnoxious and just bat an undaring eyelash at it, thinking more about how their tax dollars will go to the eventual repair of the road rather than the events taking place. Then again, these races weren’t anything new, they met international expectation and the local clubs are known for having the best armature road racers around. The Coal Trailers are the strongest team by far and a major force to be reckoned with; they are more of a school rather than a club, they teach the tricks of the trade intern producing some of the best - their motto, ‘teaching them young’ and that is what they do. Most joined the club at the mere age of 14 with only a learner’s
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The road itself was also a feet most could only dream of taking on, it required a driver's full attention. This is a mountain town that was built on coal, the winters were rough, the roads are ever winding, circling the mountains; they are also old meaning that they are extremely narrow and filled with many potholes and cracks. If you could master driving on this road, you could really do anything. This is why the people came, they either wanted to learn some new tricks and sharpen their technique. The others were apart of clubs outside of this region, thinking that they might have a good chance in beating any of the local …show more content…
It has been dark for the past hour and the crowds have started to gather around the bends of the course. The weather was complete shit, cold northern winds and a cloud filling sky - it was going to rain or snow - but that didn't stop the people from trying to get the best spot. None of the ‘noteworthy’ races were set to start for another two hours but most of these people didn’t care; they just wanted to see a race not caring if it was the captain or some want-to-be hotshot. But at the rate that the clouds were coming in the races would probably be postponed not that the racers couldn't handle a little rain -that’s not true. When you have an environment like the Coal Trailers, liability comes into play and they risk nothing, it’s better safe than

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