Creative Writing: Soldier Aturmica
The Greek air was crisp and cool breeze ruffled up the colored leaves that cluttered the ground. Soldier Aturmica stopped for a moment. She closed her eyes, and allowed her senses to amplify; from a deer chewing while grazing the fields to a leaf falling on the ground she heard it all.
“What’s the hold up?”
Realizing that she was not in her own world she blushed. She was holding up the rest of the soldiers behind her.
“Are we there yet?” Another asked.
“We keep heading east,” The commander said.
The army was under the guidance of a genderless commander. The army was under the guidance of a nameless commander. Always wearing a his/her Corinthian helmet made out of gold only leaving a pair of green eyes visible, a breast plate with no …show more content…
Enough!” the commander shouted.
“What is the meaning of this, someone put that fire out?” The commander demanded, trying to regain control.
“Your insubordination! What is your purpose?” The commander asked Carmen.
“My quarrel is not with you.” Carmen replied.
Feeling disrespected the commander responded, “You would not have that satisfaction.”
Angering Carmen more, “Do you know who I am, who my mother is? She’s given the gods a run for their money.” Carmen replied.
“I am the Gods reigning champion, I out beat all my brothers and even my father, do you know who I am?” The commander asked.
“It’s me she wants.” Aturmica said emerging from the woods and into the camps.
Carmen has left a sour taste on most of the soldier’s mouths, but they never imagined that she would ever go up against the Commander, or even Aturmica. Carmen had no boundaries, and the soldiers saw that today. Turning into her true form Carmen became a dark pink silhouette with glowing blue eyes. Her red hair was now tied up in one long thick ponytail. Without hesitation she threw a ball of smoke at Aturmica and everyone in shocked waited to see what she would be transformed into, maybe a rat, a roach, or something worse. When the smoke dissolved they realized that Aturmica had not changed one …show more content…
Revealing the rest of her body, a lean frame there was no proof of battle on her, and in the least the scars were non-existent. To convince someone that this women had commanded the strongest warriors, fought along side the legendary Amazons, and successfully won some of history’s most deadly battles, only someone of naivety could believe the stories. Aturmica was in no position to question her doubts as she had multiple gifts of her own. Aturmica had the attributes of a model, tall and very beautiful. She was often undermined because of her lanky body, lengthy slender arms, and no body definition. However in defiance of her being a lanky matron amongst the warriors, She is blessed with super strength. Ultimately being the strongest amongst her
“What’s the hold up?”
Realizing that she was not in her own world she blushed. She was holding up the rest of the soldiers behind her.
“Are we there yet?” Another asked.
“We keep heading east,” The commander said.
The army was under the guidance of a genderless commander. The army was under the guidance of a nameless commander. Always wearing a his/her Corinthian helmet made out of gold only leaving a pair of green eyes visible, a breast plate with no …show more content…
Enough!” the commander shouted.
“What is the meaning of this, someone put that fire out?” The commander demanded, trying to regain control.
“Your insubordination! What is your purpose?” The commander asked Carmen.
“My quarrel is not with you.” Carmen replied.
Feeling disrespected the commander responded, “You would not have that satisfaction.”
Angering Carmen more, “Do you know who I am, who my mother is? She’s given the gods a run for their money.” Carmen replied.
“I am the Gods reigning champion, I out beat all my brothers and even my father, do you know who I am?” The commander asked.
“It’s me she wants.” Aturmica said emerging from the woods and into the camps.
Carmen has left a sour taste on most of the soldier’s mouths, but they never imagined that she would ever go up against the Commander, or even Aturmica. Carmen had no boundaries, and the soldiers saw that today. Turning into her true form Carmen became a dark pink silhouette with glowing blue eyes. Her red hair was now tied up in one long thick ponytail. Without hesitation she threw a ball of smoke at Aturmica and everyone in shocked waited to see what she would be transformed into, maybe a rat, a roach, or something worse. When the smoke dissolved they realized that Aturmica had not changed one …show more content…
Revealing the rest of her body, a lean frame there was no proof of battle on her, and in the least the scars were non-existent. To convince someone that this women had commanded the strongest warriors, fought along side the legendary Amazons, and successfully won some of history’s most deadly battles, only someone of naivety could believe the stories. Aturmica was in no position to question her doubts as she had multiple gifts of her own. Aturmica had the attributes of a model, tall and very beautiful. She was often undermined because of her lanky body, lengthy slender arms, and no body definition. However in defiance of her being a lanky matron amongst the warriors, She is blessed with super strength. Ultimately being the strongest amongst her