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Creative Writing: Mario And Peaches
One sunny Saturday in North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina, with a temperature of 92* F, The Kiyah family of monkeys went to the beach as soon as their breakfast of bananas and eggs was over. Kiyah made sure to feed Mario and Peaches (both goldfish) but forgot to feed Mickey(the cat) . “I’ll be home later and I’ll feed you guys again. Have fun but not too much fun, do not destroy the house. And I am serious guys. “ Mickey begins to tell her she forgot about him,but as he is saying his first three words she slams the door shut. Mario is the oldest goldfish. He was blind in his left eye and Peaches was his best friend. Mario was 3 years old and Peaches was only 1 ½. Peaches was missing part of her right fin because she was born in a …show more content…
When he comes out and tells her what happened and why it happened, she begins to cry even harder. He looks at her and apologizes for lying. “I’m really sorry for hurting your best friend He and I really do not want to lose you as a friend.“ She is one of the very few friends that he has. She looks at her and says “ Never talk to me again. I can’t believe you lied to me and you killed my best friend all in the same day. How selfish of you. “
He looks at her and says “ I’m sorry Peaches, I understand he was your best friend and everything but he has not liked me since the day they brought him home and it got to a point where i couldn’t take it anymore. I understand if you want me to leave you alone. Now i have to explain all of this to Kiyah and her family when they get home. “ Peaches just wipes her face and goes into her room and pretends like she never met
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“A long day at the beach deserves some good ole’ pizza.” Kiyah cleans up the water and the broken glass off of the floor and sits down next to Mickey and asks “Hey Mick, what happened and where is Mario?”. When he tells her the story she gets upset and begins crying. She throws him outside and tells him to get lost. He is standing outside on the porch for a while hoping she didn’t mean it and she would let him back in. In about 10 minutes he begins to walk away because he realizes she isn’t going to change her mind about him, and he really does need to find another home. “Maybe I will find a family with no fish so I won’t have to go through this. Maybe they won’t put me out after forgetting to feed me”. Mickey says to himself as he is walking away. He keeps walking and never looks back, because he knows that there is no return. In the end, Mickey realizes that if he would have just been honest to Peaches from the start he would not have lost her as a friend. He also realizes that if he would have just talked to Mario and found out why Mario did not like him, none of this would have ever

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