Creative Writing: Jebediah's Life

It was a lengthy, and a barren day on the fish farm. Young Jebediah had been out on the sparkling porcelain lake for what seemed like hours. You could tell by, the stench of perspiration and sweat that temporarily acted like his men’s body spray. He also looked exceedingly drained, and was beginning to receive an aching sunburn across his worn out body. His denim pant legs and his coral button down shirt sleeves were rolled up. You could tell that he had been sweating because his skin was glistening and it had a certain glow. Although he had been out there for hours he still was not able to catch any fish that his family could digest for a fulfilling dinner.
Although his stomach growled for food and an astonishing feast, he knew that if he
They would be able to feast and digest until they couldn’t anymore. All because of the fact that Jebediah was too busy daydreaming, his family wouldn't be able to enjoy the luxurious meal of a fish and instead they would be stuck nibbling on the obnoxious, sickening, kidney beans for their dinner.
He could not believe at all, he had been patiently waiting in the blazing summer heat all day and he had finally caught what he was sure to be an astonishing, ginormous, creature. But because of the fact that he completely forgot about the fact that in order to catch a fish you had to quickly reel in your catch before the animal can snatch the bait off of the hook and submerge away before you can reel it in.
Little Jeb, gently whispered to himself, “Maybe this time if I am, once again, very patient and I do the exact same thing I have been doing, but also paying attention to my fishing rod. Maybe the same result will happen and I will catch a tremendous fish that my parents and siblings can devour.” He had thought that it was a reasonably smart plan so he set it forth into action. Jebidiah sat back down on the soft but itchy, emerald green grass, casted out his fishing line, and patiently waited for his once in a lifetime, immense,