Introductory Statement: Why getting married? Why being single? Let me tell you why.
Harnessing Statement (links to central idea): _________________________________________
Thesis: As the world is becoming more diverse, people have different opinions as to whether to get married or stay single, and contributing to their decision are the amount of money they used, the freedom they get, and the responsibilities they have on their shoulders.
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Topic Sentence: (Thematic Topic) Money, is something everyone needs, getting married or being single both needs money, therefore money is a must need.
Point A1: More people so more grocery will be need.
Proof and Explanation: If more grocery is needed, then more money is needed since there are two or more family members, therefore cost of living will go up.
Point B1: Being single does not mean less money is spent because sometimes eating out or go shopping alone will cost money as well.
Proof and Explanation: Most of people are that single will eat out because they think eating at home alone will be lonely so they go out to eat a lot and so money will be spent rapidly as well.
Point A2: Money can also be an argument in a marriage.
Proof and Explanation: Money will start argument/fights because sometimes husband/wife spend too much on their own properties and this makes each other mad, and that tiny little thing can just start up the argument.
Point B2: Having all the money kept by yourself, may also cause problems like bank loan, card loan and etc.
Proof and Explanation: This shows that being single can also cause problems with money because there are no one to keep track of your credit balance, you bank accounts so that people might not be able to control themselves from shopping or buying things.
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