College Admissions Essay: Turning Points In My Life

There were many turning points in my life, one being able to find my true passions and own hidden goals. When I was a sophomore, I discovered drawing, which was my escape from reality of expectations and results. I loved art, because there wasn’t a right or wrong answer to how I could have approach it. Art quickly became my hobby, and I discover more creativity and colors to life. I learn to appreciate other things in life, and work harder to look outside the box. Drawing also helped me to improve my problem solving skills; I learn to analyze things in front of me deeper than on just the surface. Therefore, I will always be grateful to be able to discover drawing, which gives more creative outlook onto my life. Going into early adulthood does result in a lot of decision making in life, it was difficult to balance between intimacy versus isolation. I wasn’t the type to need a sexual relationship in order to feel like I was needed, I just needed comfort in just friends and family.
Truthfully, I had been loneness I haven’t found a significant other, even my parents were a bit concern for me that I would end up just alone when I grow up. But when I was at the end of the first year of college, I find myself freer to just be able to love myself first before I could love another person. I wanted to build connections to myself and what my beliefs were. Therefore I end up focusing everyday on what kind of person I needed to be first before I could truly get into a committed