College Admissions Essay: I Want To Graduate College

My goal is to graduate college on top of my class, debt free and at least a 3.0 GPA. My dream is to graduate with a bachelor in Health science on top of my class, I will be the first to graduated high school, and went and graduate college. I don’t just want to graduate; I want to graduate with flying colors. My obstacles are the same as any college student such as time, needs and wants, excuses, not focusing enough (distraction). I find myself sometimes having a hard time deciding my needs and wants, which also waste time. It shouldn’t be that hard; the answer is obvious. I have a schedule, and I sometimes mess up the whole schedule because I do what I want instead of what I need to do, I find an excuse and say I have time. Time is not even enough in one day at
I believe you, Jesus can help me overcome my obstacles. Help me to stay focus and keep my head in the game. I would like for you to check on me, and lend me a hand when I feel like giving up. I’ll admit I have some fear or reluctance to ask you for help. I know I you have better and important thing to do. I know what I plan or ask might be different from yours. I would like for you to help me with one of my most challenging academic goals, distractions. I really need your help keeping me focus. I know you had helped me in the past, you get me and know me. I really appreciated the help in the past, I am grateful for that, I know you have every right if you don’t want to help me now. I am sorry if I come up ungrateful or a little strong. I need your help to achieve my goals, you help me graduated high school with more accomplish I had hope for. I need your help to achieve my goals, to stay focus, someone to believe in me, someone to lead and carry me when I fall down and want to give