Coast4Life Inc. (C4L) | February 15, 2013 | | Candidate Assessment Form |
Candidate: | 1085889 | AE: Above Expectations ME+: High Meets Expectations ME: Meets Expectations ME-: Low Meets Expectations BE: Below Expectations NA: Not Attempted
Assessment: | ME- |
Length of Response:
Word Count: Within the limit – The limit is 750 words (introduction, body and conclusion only). Appendices: Within the limit – The limit is 5 pages.
Content that exceeds the length limits is not considered in the assessment of the response. Note that the words and numbers in any text box, table or object in the body of the report are included in the word count.
The following comments provide general feedback about the response, indicate the greatest strengths and weaknesses of the response, and provide critical comments for each subcomponent. Feedback that is more detailed is provided directly on the marked copy of the response. Please use these comments and the descriptions of what is being assessed to gain an understanding of where the response could be improved.
General Comments on Overall Performance:The most important strengths of the response overall are: 1. Identification of key alternatives. 2. Good consideration for a qualitative and quantitative analysis of each alternative. 3. Integration was adequate.The major areas that require improvement are: 1. Recommendations could have been better supported and did not mitigate various weaknesses. 2. Additional operational issues could have been identified and resolved.Details pertaining to where the response could be improved are indicated on the marked copy of the response. |
The competencies and attributes being assessed in this assignment are grouped into multiple components and are detailed below. They are not all weighted equally in determining the assessment. The performance standards will be higher for the next assignment.
References: labels and audit trails are provided where appropriate (e.g. the report is easy to follow, provides direction to the reader). | AE: Few problems with language use or content expression; the report flows well and provides good direction to the reader. Overall, the report is easy to follow. | ME: Some problems with language use or content expression, but they are not distracting; the report flows well and provides acceptable direction to the reader. Overall, the report is still easy to follow. | BE: Major problems such as distracting errors. Overall, the report is difficult to follow. | | ME+ | ME | ME- | | 6. c) The introduction, body and conclusion combined are no more than 750 words, and there are no more than five (5) pages of properly formatted appendices. Content that exceeds these length limits is not considered in the assessment of the response. The report is limited to one MS Word and one MS Excel file. | Comments: * 6. a) meets expectations as most elements of this component are met with a few minor problems. To improve the response to an AE, include a conclusion that highlights all the key points and provides closure to the report. Also ensure to provide better labels to sub-headings (i.e. – differentiate strategic from minor alternatives). * 6. b) This component meets expectations but contains some minor problems. To improve to an AE, avoid wording/language issues by proof-reading the report. Ensure to provide names to each appendix as opposed to Appendix 1 or 2. |