Causes of Unemployment in Cambodia

Name : SOK PANHA
Class : A606
Sex : Male
Home Works (Essay writing)
Topic: MY FAVORITE PLACE

Brainstorms
 Beautiful
 Attractive
 Good environment, natural air
 Many visitors and tourists
 Famous
 Khmer’s heritage
 Quality of stone
 An old age
 Have to many tourism
 Natural air, and good environment
 Mixed of nation visited there
 Locate in Siem Reap province, Cambodia
 Have good design
 Meaning on the walls
 The best place of Cambodia
 The best well-known in the world…

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 Essay outline
I.

Introduction

A. Hook: I am not a good visitor
B. Connecting information: I used to visit anywhere on only my vocation
C. Thesis: I have only one place that I favorite in...

II.

Body

A. My favorite place is very interesting, and everyone are interested.
 Attractive
 Too many tourism
 Many student around the world have been studying about it.
B. Angkor Wat is one of the best wonderful temple in the world.
 It is one of the oldest temple in Cambodia
 The best design (beautiful, good looking, and long life)
 The statues seem still alive
C. The Angkor Wat is the best place in Cambodia o It’s the heart of Cambodian’s people o It make income from many factors

III.

Conclusion
A. Restate my favorite place
B. The next Khmer’s generation should be take care our temple from now on and forever more…

My Favorite Place
I am not a good visitor, yet I’m very busy with my study that I have to study two major at the same time in full of the day. I can anywhere on only my vocation.
Before I decide to go any places, I have to think about it very clearly. All of my previous vocation I had visited a several places, but I have only one place that I favorite in, and it is the best place of my visiting.
My favorite place is very interesting one, and everyone are very interested it.
There are too many tourism had and wanted visited there. From day to day, there have many student around the world who