Assignment Feedback | Title of Access to HE Diploma: Business studies | Unit title(s): Business and Management | Unit code(s): AA3/2/LN/080AA3/3/LN/081 | Learner: Tajgul | Tutor/Assessor: G Persaud/I Parper | Title of Assignment: Business structure | AssignmentNumber: 1 of 1 for this Unit1 | Internally moderated? | Yes / No | IM’s signature: | |
Part A: Feedback on credit level
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AC no | Credit achieved (L2/L3 ) | Location of evidence | Tutor/Assessor comments on assessment criteria (you could also indicate on the work itself where each AC is met) | 1 | 2 | 3-4 | Shown a good range of points for discussion in this task with some very good use of examples in the 3 main sectors.Needed to look at grammar, spelling and sentence structure.An effort in the use of examples and evidences to justify the roles and purposes of each department within the businesses. Need to look at grammar, spelling and sentence structure. Also better analysis using the key words: why, how, when they do it.Shown comparisons of two diagrams and based on structures. Used some good examples in these. Needed to have better referenced diagrams and clearer application as opposed to just a flat structure. | | | | | 2 | 2 | 5 | | | | | | 3 | 2 | 6-7 | | | | | | | | | | Additional feedback | Good points and discussion in this assignment but needs to look at the grammar, sentence structure and punctuation.See comments inside | Level achieved: | 2 | Tutor/Assessor’ssignature: | G Persaud | Date: | 10/12 |
In order to achieve credit at Level 2 or Level 3, learners must meet all the assessment criteria for that unit. If there is more than one assignment for a unit, the credit level for the unit cannot be awarded until all assignments have been completed.