Name: Abena Savage
1st Body Paragraph (Write out 1-6 in relation to the first quotation you have selected from your target essay.) 1.Topic Sentence: The word “spyware” has a very negative connotation associated with it but Coben goes to suggest that when it comes to protecting children it is not a bad thing. 2.Signal Phrase: That the invasion of privacy does not mean that you don’t trust your child but it helps in keeping them safe from the danger of the cyber world. 3.Quotation from the essay w/Parenthetical Reference: Coben goes on to argue his point by providing two real world life scenarios about “young boy unknowingly conversing with a pedophile or the girl who was cyber bullied to the point where she committed suicide.” 4.Interpretation/Explanation & Discussion of the Quotation: Coben use this quote to play on the emotional appeal of the caring parents that it is essential to take necessary precautions to protect their children from the real dangers that we have read about on the cover of newspapers. 5.Evaluate the writer's effectiveness: Coben was effective in using the parents’ fears of their children that cyber-bulling and child luring are a very real possibility.
2nd Body Paragraph (Write out 1-6 in relation to the 2nd quotation.) 1.Topic Sentence: How fair should a caring parent go to protect their children? 2.Signal Phrase: Protecting and educating our children is a parent’s responsibility and this job should be upheld in the cyber world also. 3.Quotation from the essay w/Parenthetical Reference: Coben gives the example “ overprotective parents fight their kids’ battles on the playground, berate coaches about playing time and fill out college applications” Coben 19, Par. 4) that parents are willing to protect there children from the world they see but when it comes to protecting the cyber world “Most parents wouldn’t even consider it” (Cohen 19, Par. 5). 4.Interpretation/Explanation & Discussion of the Quotation: Coben is saying that...
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