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Bob's Short Story 'Dots Donut Shop'
Dot’s Donut Shop
Despite its location, Dots Donut Shop was about to get famous. People were opening up to run into the shop, just to get some of their delicious desserts. One day girl that was eleven years old walked into the shop. Bob, the manager, of “Dots Donut Shop” told him that her name was Sandy. After, Sandy told Bob about her descendants, she also told the manager about how much she loved the food they have. So, Sandy thanked him for opening the shop, so that her family can eat at a place like this. And so then Bob acknowledged her for coming to his donut shop. Then, he started to hear people wailing and bawling all the way from the bottom of the mountain. When Bob, the administrator, came back inside, he saw so many people he didn't
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So then he told Christopher to call 9-1-1. After, the ambulance came to take Isabella to the hospital, when she finally woke up the doctor told her that her arm was broken and that she hit her head pretty hard when she fell and that Isabella would need to take some medication to make her head not hurt as much as it does now. After, the doctor finished talking she asked the doctor, “How did I fall”? “I don't know, but your friends told me that you fell off of a mountain while carrying food or something like that” the doctor said to Isabella. Isabella asked the doctor if she could get home to her family, but the doctor wouldn’t let her because of the stitches on her right arm. When the doctor said that she couldn’t go home, she started to freak out. So, the doctor gave her some medicine to help her calm down. Meanwhile back at the shop, things were really crazy, people were backed up all the to the door at Dot’s Donut Shop because of all of the stupid reporters at the front of the line talking to the manager, Bob, about how the donut shop is such a big hit.But the manager didn’t care about all the people or the reporters, all he could think about was if Isabella was okay. So Bob, the manager, told everyone that they need to go home and come

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