The chronological order the events are unfolding in a way that is making sense. There also, to me, seems to be a sense of buildup to a climax, like in a movie tends to do. One critique, however, is the continued detailed wording of some paragraphs. The wording feels sometimes like it is going into too much detail, which loses my attention at times. It still seems to be an annoyance to have to sift through paragraphs worth of wording just to get to the story. A few details would have been more than enough for a description, but pages of these unimportant details makes me lose interest quick. Though with this detailness paints a very clear picture of the setting as well as leaving very few details in question. I’ve already passed the halfway point of the book, but the excitement level has continued to remain
The chronological order the events are unfolding in a way that is making sense. There also, to me, seems to be a sense of buildup to a climax, like in a movie tends to do. One critique, however, is the continued detailed wording of some paragraphs. The wording feels sometimes like it is going into too much detail, which loses my attention at times. It still seems to be an annoyance to have to sift through paragraphs worth of wording just to get to the story. A few details would have been more than enough for a description, but pages of these unimportant details makes me lose interest quick. Though with this detailness paints a very clear picture of the setting as well as leaving very few details in question. I’ve already passed the halfway point of the book, but the excitement level has continued to remain