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December 1, 2011
Can Cancer be Cured?
Cancer is the main disease that kills a lot of people in our time, but most of the people do not know what is cancer? MAKE THIS MORE ACADEMIC According to the National Cancer Institute " Cancer is a term used for diseases in which abnormal cells divide without control and are able to invade other tissues. Cancer cells can spread to other parts of the body through the blood and lymph systems". What has made this disease to be known as a killer a large amount of people all over the world? The data and statistics show how dangerous this disease is because of the large number of deaths caused by this illness. Every year the American Cancer Society shows new statistics about the number of people who become victims of this disease. For example, in 2011 the number of deaths in the US is about 571,950 which means one in four deaths is due to cancer.
BASAN WHERE IS YOUR THESIS??? WHY DOES THIS PARAGRAPH END IN A QUESTION? DO YOU HAVE 2 INTRIDUCTION PARAGRAPHS? IF SO THEY MIGHT BE A BIT TOO LONG YOU NEEDS TO SHORTEN AND ORGANIZE THEM BETTER. There is no main idea of your essay. What do you want to talk about?
For sure, the scientists have tried to find solution that can treat cancer. For example, the percentage from 2001 till 2005 shows the number of death by cancer decreased by 1.9% .However, because cancer is not a disease which happens in a specific part of a body, so there are verity kinds of cancers. This problem made the scientists to face harder difficulties to find a solution to all the kinds of cancer. They first have found what causes cancer in order to work on. As a result for their researching, they have found that there are some reasons which make a body get cancer but fortunately some of the reasons are controllable. Smoking, toxic elements and radiation are those reasons that cause some kinds of cancer. For instance, the American Cancer Society shows that more than 180,000 have die due to smoking cancer . Here is an easy solution to prevent a kind cancer which is avoid smoking as scientists suggest . What is the hell are you talking about? Find a thesis to talk about, and try to talk about. Are you talking about Cancer? Or the causes of cancer or the results? Find a broader thesis to talk about? IS THIS A BODY PARAGRAPH?? IF SO YOU NEED NUMBERS ABOUT SMOKING AND STUDIES BY DOCTORS YOU ALSO NEED TO ORGANIZE THIS BETTER
Stress is singed as another reason of getting cancer. In Life Over Cancer, Keith Block, MD says that there is a strong relation between stress and cancer and he explains how stress causes cancer. For example, he says, “chronically elevated levels of the stress hormone adrenaline increase levels of blood glucose and clotting factors, which…are conducive to the growth and spread of cancer." NEED MORE EVIDENCE HERE. However, in the same time scientists WHICH SCIENTISTS??? IS THIS FROM A REPORT?? advice us how to avoid from stress and show us some ways to do so. They tell us managing the time that we work daily is an effective way not to get stress which most of the time brings cancer. The researches show that many of the patients who have gotten cancer are employed in stressful jobs. They also point out the reasons of this stress which are ''fearing of being late, more overtime due to staff cutbacks, pressure to perform to meet rising expectations but with no increase in job satisfactions and pressure to work at optimum levels-all the time. ". THIS IS INSUFFICIENT EVIDENCE. YOU HAVE NOT CONVINCED ME OR PROVEN THAT JOB STRESS = CANCER. NO NUMBERS NO STUDIES The scientists tell the people that they should take care of themselves and do one thing at a time. They also say that patients will notice a reduction in their stress levels when they make positive lifestyle choices.
Since, the scientists have not found all the reasons to give advice, they...
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