Top-Rated Free Essay
Preview

Battle of the Cowshed (My Edit)

Good Essays
509 Words
Grammar
Grammar
Plagiarism
Plagiarism
Writing
Writing
Score
Score
Battle of the Cowshed (My Edit)
(My edit of the Battle of the Cowshed)
“They are coming!” Snowball shrieked, standing on the fence, observing the men’s every action carefully.
“To your places, comrades!” Snowball hollered. All the animals, prepared to fight the battle and to rid their enemies off their farm’s sacred soil, dashed to their respective places assigned by Snowball much earlier. They had predicted the men would attempt to recapture the farm after the Rebellion. Snowball, having read some books on Julius Caesar’s battling techniques, had prepared the animals for the fight. Jones together with his men armed with weapons barged through the gate of “Animal Farm.” The animals, nowhere in sight, were hiding away, as instructed by Snowball. The humans slashed around the farm, destroying everything in sight, like tornadoes tearing through the place. They repainted the name of the farm to “Manor Farm”. A spark in the animals had been ignited, seeing their enemies trod on their farm. They then seized the opportunity and pecked at the humans’ calves, injuring many of them. The humans were caught off guard by the swarm of animals. Then, Snowball then sent out the first wave of soldiers, consisting of pigeons, geese and ducks. The animals braved on; ready to defend their farm. The pigeons pelted the humans’ with their dung, clouding their vision. The geese pretended to flee, leading the men to the cowshed. It was all a decoy, an illusion for the humans to think that half their battle had already been won.

The humans charged towards the fleeing animals, falling into Snowball’s trap. The humans were hailed with attacks from all sides. Boxer used all his strength sent a flying kick at Mr Jones’ sending him three metres away. Boxer then galloped valiantly to the flagpole where their farm’s flag flew high and free. In his glee, he accidentally stepped on the gun that had been left beside the flagpole and it accidentally shot Jones in the head, causing him to die instantaneously. Seeing that their leader, Jones was injured caused the men to flee in fear. The animals took their chance and attacked the humans for the last time. Boxer took one last kick and kicked one of the human’s back causing him to fall forward. A sheep used his head to butt another human who is badly injured. The farmer, butted by the sheep, fell over and every animal kicked the poor man. All the humans then got chased out of the farm, leaving the animals victorious.
The animals counted the number of dead. Squealer, Jones and a few sheep had died. After Snowball led the animals to bury their fallen friends by the cowshed, they celebrated Jones’ death. However Boxer, crying, whimpered, “I do not mean to kill anyone, even a wicked human; I could not bare to kill a single soul.” Snowball consoled Boxer, and bestowed the status and honour of ‘Animal Hero, First Class’ upon him. Snowball held a solemn funeral for their fallen friends. Snowball then named the battle, the “Battle of the cowshed”.

You May Also Find These Documents Helpful

  • Good Essays

    Snowball is very inventive, he strives to make new innovations on the farm. For example, “He talked learnedly about field drains, silage, and basic slag, and had worked out a complicated scheme for all the animals to drop their dung directly in the fields, at a different spot every day, to save the labour of cartage.” Snowball comes up with these schemes by himself and presents them to the animals. He has read books…

    • 1502 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    I think this shows how the animals had made a definite decision of rebellion towards humans and Mr. Jones.…

    • 776 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    “Men were everywhere. They were in great numbers - there were about twenty I’d say - most of them had sticks, but Jones had a gun,” recollects a chicken involved in the battle. We are not certain of the exact number of humans, but all the animals say that Jones was well equipped with a gun. On the scene,…

    • 336 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    George Orwell’s Animal Farm contains a particular character named Napoleon, a fierce-looking Berkshire boar. Napoleon is conniving, a plagiarist and manipulative. At a meeting, when the animals had to make a decision, Orwell showed Napoleon’s first conniving scheme, “Napoleon stood up and, casting a peculiar sidelong look at Snowball, uttered a high-pitched whimper...dashed straight for Snowball, who only sprang from his place just in time to escape their snapping jaws” (Orwell 39). Here the dogs that Napoleon had raised attacked Snowball. It is apparent that Napoleon took these dogs to use them for what he needed, and at this time he needed to get Snowball out of the way. This action of attacking Snowball was very harmful, he only just barely…

    • 391 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    It would have been a good idea since the animals were half way to starvation from their rations making some animals unable to fight alongside Napoleon, but the idea also conflicted with two of the commandments. So even if there were animals that fought against Snowball he would not fight back.…

    • 832 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Snowball is full of ambition when the rebellion starts to take its course, because he heartily believes that Animalism could develop into something that all the…

    • 595 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Finally, Orwell presents Snowball as brave and committed to the revolution and what it stands for. In the battle of the cowshed he is injured when it says that ‘pellets scored…

    • 480 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Satisfactory Essays

    Many of the animals die due to theses conditions such as the sheep in the battle and Boxer since he works so hard.…

    • 256 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Satisfactory Essays
  • Good Essays

    “On Guard, Rainsford,” said Zaroff. The men circled each other, glaring with a stare that could kill a man. “I see you have come unprepared. You'll go down without a doubt,” said Zaroff.…

    • 455 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    1a) From the extract, we learn that Snowball is clever. That fact that he “had studied an old book of Julius Caesar's campaigns.” emphasises this. He studies the book – this shows the reader that Snowball is a lot more intelligent than he lets on because he actually taken the time to study this book – something no other animal has done. It's also discovered that he is studying Julius Caesar's campaigns – Julius Caesar was the ruler of Rome and a powerful figure in history. It's possible that Snowball takes inspiration from a ruler like Caesar. However the statement taken from the book also tells us the reader that Snowball is a sneaky character. He tells the other animals they should disregard any item that has anything to do with Jones, yet he studies from books – books about humans, created for humans. Snowball has clearly realised he has an advantage over the animals due to their lack of intelligence.…

    • 610 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Old Major, a prize-winning boar, gathers the animals of the Manor Farm for a meeting in the big barn. He tells them of a dream he has had in which all animals live together with no human beings to oppress or control them. He tells the animals that they must work toward such a paradise and teaches them a song called “Beasts of England,” in which his dream vision is lyrically described. The animals greet Major’s vision with great enthusiasm. When he dies only three nights after the meeting, three younger pigs, Snowball, Napoleon, and Squealer formulate his main principles into a philosophy called Animalism. Late one night, the animals manage to defeat the farmer Mr. Jones in a battle, running him off the land. They rename the property Animal Farm and dedicate themselves to achieving Major’s dream. The cart-horse Boxer devotes himself to the cause with particular zeal, committing his great strength to the prosperity of the farm and adopting as a personal maxim the affirmation “I will work harder.”…

    • 1025 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Better Essays

    In Animal Farm, Mr. Jones represents the last Czar of Russia, Czar Nicholas II (Sparknotes). Mr. Jones repeatedly abuses and mistreates his animals, through acts of whippings, lack of adequate food, and harsh labor (Orwell). After a night in which he forgets to feed his animals, the animals break into food supply and begin to feed themselves. Jones and his men attempt to stop the animals but are chased off and away from the farm (Orwell). Shortly before the animals revolt, Mr. Jones and his men go "rabbitting" in which they try to rid the farm of rabbits that aredestroying the crops. Mr. Jones and his men 's ' attempt at "rabbitting" parallels Czar Nicholas II 's attempt to maintain law and order in Russia before the Bolshevik Revolution, as the rabbits of the farm represent the lower social classes of Russia, who begin to start waves of violence throughout the cities before the revolution (Newspeak). The animal 's revolt against Mr. Jones parallels the Bolshevik Revolution of 1917, in which the people of Russia ousted Czar Nicholas II after years of oppression and poverty, paralleling the lack of food and harsh punishments for the animals.…

    • 3101 Words
    • 13 Pages
    Better Essays
  • Good Essays

    animals together. He tells the animals that they must work together. After he dies, two pigs Napoleon and Snowball assumed command. Days later, the animals revolt and throw Mr. Jones away from the farm. Then the animals rename it “Animal Farm”. Animal Farm was supposed to make life better for all the animals. Later Mr. Jones tries retaking the farm; but the animals defeat him at what they call the "Battle of the Cowshed." After, Napoleon and Snowball start fighting with one another for leadership. One day, Napoleon’s dogs chase Snowball from the farm. Snowball is never seen again. Napoleon declares himself the leader; later on, he reviles his corrupt nature. He changes his stance on the windmill building, declares pigs the supreme animal, and the animals where starving for food. Soon Napoleon begins executing any animal that “conspires with Snowball.” As time passes, Napoleon acts more and more like a human, departing from the original Animal Farm rules.…

    • 390 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    Napoleon commands on his dogs to slaughter many animals in the farm along with breaking a rule of Animalism (Orwell 56, 82, 85).An animal could be slaughtered by Napoleon if it disobeyed his orders (Orwell 56). In another time, “[the dogs] dashed straight for Snowball, who only…[in] that moment…was out of the door…” (Orwell 35) and trying to eliminate him. This made the other animals frightened and terrified from their sharp action (Orwell 35-36). Right after Snowball’s elimination, “the three dogs who happened to be with [Squealer] crowed so threateningly, that [the other animals] accepted his explanation without further questions” (Orwell 39) by using his persuasive talkative way. The use of manipulation through the dogs has a sense of fear on the other animals to prevent them from having a…

    • 754 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Good Essays
  • Good Essays

    It was our regular Sunday meeting and Snowball broke into a passionate speech about how and why the windmill should be built. I declared myself against this idea from the beginning, everyone should have caught on that I had from when I urinated all over Snowball’s plans for the windmill. This strongly divided the whole farm on the subject of the windmill. I have to admit Snowball’s speech was intriguing, but just as the vote was going to happen; I stood and let out a high-pitched whimper. This was my, what you could call a ,‘code’ for my monstrous dogs to join us in this gathering. They dashed straight for Snowball, just as trained to. Snowball only sprang from his place in time to escape from their snapping jaws. He was out the door in seconds with the dogs at his feet, he suddenly slipped and it seemed certain that I had finally gotten rid of him for good. I don’t know how but he managed to get back on his feet, running faster than ever. One of the dogs had all but closed his jaws on his tail, but he whisked it away at the last minute. With a few feet to spare Snowball dived into a hole in the hedge and was no longer seen.…

    • 720 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Good Essays

Related Topics