Bad Posture
Bad posture is represented in both Amy Cuddy's article,"Your iPhone is Ruining Your Posture and your mood," and Jane E. Brody's article," Posture Affects Standing and Not just the Physical Kind," both of these articles are good explaining posture.
Cuddy's article, "Your iPhone is Ruining Your Posture and your mood," uses evidence that explains how mood can be effected by posture. People of older age can have a hump in their back," When Mr. August started treating patients more than 30 years ago, he says he saw plenty of "dowagers" humps, where the upper back had frozen into a forward curve, in grandmothers and great grandmothers.Now he says hes seeing the same stoop in teenagers." He is seeing slouching in backs of young people. Also she adds, " One published in 2010 in the official journal of the …show more content…
You can rely on what she writes because she has a good reputation.Cuddy is credible because now and days a lot of people use their phones and when they use them they tend to slouch.She introduces how phones can effect you. She uses sources to support her argument on how phones can be one reason your posture is bad.
Brody is a author on science and nutrition topics and reports extensively for The New York Times. She is called the "High Priestess of Health." She takes her personal experience to make examples of posture. She also uses different sources to support her argument on how posture can affect your health.
I prefer Cuddy's article,"Your iPhone is Ruining Your Posture and your mood." She focuses on one reason why we slouch, our phones. She connects the phones with physical and emotional ways. The way she organizes her paragraphs are good. She gives her argument then supports it by using evidence. Also at the end of her article she gives a counterargument and a rebuttal, she also restates her argument at the end. you can trust what she writes because she went to a really good school and is a
Cuddy's article, "Your iPhone is Ruining Your Posture and your mood," uses evidence that explains how mood can be effected by posture. People of older age can have a hump in their back," When Mr. August started treating patients more than 30 years ago, he says he saw plenty of "dowagers" humps, where the upper back had frozen into a forward curve, in grandmothers and great grandmothers.Now he says hes seeing the same stoop in teenagers." He is seeing slouching in backs of young people. Also she adds, " One published in 2010 in the official journal of the …show more content…
You can rely on what she writes because she has a good reputation.Cuddy is credible because now and days a lot of people use their phones and when they use them they tend to slouch.She introduces how phones can effect you. She uses sources to support her argument on how phones can be one reason your posture is bad.
Brody is a author on science and nutrition topics and reports extensively for The New York Times. She is called the "High Priestess of Health." She takes her personal experience to make examples of posture. She also uses different sources to support her argument on how posture can affect your health.
I prefer Cuddy's article,"Your iPhone is Ruining Your Posture and your mood." She focuses on one reason why we slouch, our phones. She connects the phones with physical and emotional ways. The way she organizes her paragraphs are good. She gives her argument then supports it by using evidence. Also at the end of her article she gives a counterargument and a rebuttal, she also restates her argument at the end. you can trust what she writes because she went to a really good school and is a