Argumentative Essay: A Tale Of Two Summers For Parents

Elementary school age children should have adult supervision because children in that age don’t know how to defend themselves nor do they know what is and isn't right. Although it might show them how to be more independent and responsible, but i still believe that children under the age of 10 should have adult supervision.

In the article “ A tale of two summers for parents” by Belinda Luscombe explains how a 35 year old Shanesha Taylor left two toddlers in a hot car in Arizona for more than an hour. Tylor left her kids in that hot car because she had a job interview and she had no one else to take care of her children. Daycares should be more affordable or maybe even free because it gives their parents more options and reduces the amounts of death caused by leaving their children unintended . We need to understand that children don’t know how to take care of themselves, they don't know what is right and wrong or what to do in case of an emergency. When children get older they start to experience new things and they are going to start “growing up”.
But there is a time where they went to go outside and play. One of them fell and landed on the edge of the glass, the glass gave him a really deep cut both of them didn’t know what to do they just looked at each other crying. They looked like if they've broke something in the house. My brother started to scream so my mom came outside and tide a thin sweater around his leg, my mother took him to the hospital. What if my mother wasn't there what could've happened, he would probably bleed to death.

Therefore I believe that children should be supervised by an adult. It would reduce the amount of deaths and reduce the amount of abuse. It will also limit the amount of children having problems later on in