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Alonzo: Personal Narrative
The day was bad because Alonzo and Sergio where fighting. When we got to are three class we're where out side Alonzo dropped Sergio in the grass be for we got in class. Then they stop fighting when we got in class. Then we got to are four class Alonzo got Sergio in a head lock. Then Sergio hit Alonzo in the face then he hit him in the face to. Then the teachers came in running in the class and Brock up the fight.

We did not know what was going to happen to them. We heard the teacher on the phone he was talking to the principal. The principal came in the the class and touch Alonzo and Sergio out of class. Then he brought them back to class. Then the said how started the fight and we said we did not know how started the fight. All of us got
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