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Alantic Ocean Narrative
This summer I went to the Alantic ocean in North Carolina with my family. We didn't bring any food so we were all starving, (well I was). There was a huge storm on the other side of the ocean. so the waves were huge. When my friend and I went out.......the next thing I know I couldn't see anybody. I was so scared I couldn't see my friend any longer. I look right then left. No one! Oh no here comes a wave. I go under , I pop back up......swish. I get pulled under. I stayed under as long as. I could but all I could think was my eyes hurt my nose stings and my heart was racing like a cheetha. Then I feel a hand pull me up then my friend asked if I was ok? I replied yes. Then we returned to the site.
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