Abusive Relationships Thesis

When I read the first sentence of your introduction it grab my attention. I knew it was more to the story and I had a feeling it was going to be about the writer. It peaked my interest to read more about this story. I think the writer will talk about the struggles of getting out of abusive relationships. The thesis statement made a strong claim which the writer promised not to fall in the same situation of being in an abusive relationship. The introduction gave statistical background of abusive relationships. The transition of information was smooth throughout the introduction.