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A Coughing Short Story
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Coughing violently, I passed the glass pipe along to the young man beside me, who took a long drag before handing it on the next in the circle. I could feel the foul-tasting smoke tear down my throat and withstood the urge to vomit. The entire room was overflowing with a fetid haze; it grated against the back of my throat as though it were sandpaper. I fought to maintain my composure and appearance of serenity, but if anyone looked close enough they would easily be able to distinguish my sense of discomfort. Just as I began to recover from the last intake of noxious fumes, a nudge on my right shoulder signalled to me that it was my turn. Reluctantly, I took the pipe and began the process again.
This was my weekend socialisation.
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“Stand up and tell me the truth.”
My father grabbed me by the collar and wrenched me to my feet. My body was in a slouch, looking only at the ground.
“Now tell me the truth, you lying shit. Are you stoned?”
I shook my head slowly and prepared myself for another blow, before a different voice rang out from across the room.
“Stop it, Mark.”
I glanced up to see my father’s clenched fist raised above his shoulder, ready to strike again. Behind him, the sturdy frame of my Uncle Jed stood tall against the off-white walls. My father’s grimacing face and angered eyes swung to look at him, and he released his firm grip on my collar. I took the swift opportunity and retreated to my room. I lay down on my rickety single bed closing my eyes. I don’t know how long I lay there, eyes shut, but by the time I opened my eyes the effects of the drugs had worn off. I headed out of my room and back into the kitchen. I rounded the corner again, this time finding the looming figure of my Uncle, Jed, waiting for me.
“Ricky, I need to talk to you. Can we sit?”
I nodded curiously and sat at the dining table. Jed occupied the seat opposite.
“I have an offer for you. I need you to consider this carefully. Are you thinking clearly

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