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Christmas with the Underprivilige
Short Story by: Edwin T. Ramirez Jr.
Subject: Arts & Appreciation
Christmas with the Underprivilege Once upon a time, theres a 7 years old cute little girl, named Emily who had a good and rich parents named John, his Father and Michelle, her mother. Emily is spoiled and doing all what she likes, no matter what, its good or bad. Emily is a 1st grader on the school of St. Monique Montessori on her neighborhood she lived in. Emily is a bully student on her classroom. There are times that the parents of Emily is called on the Guidance Counselor office for the complaint of her fellow classmates of bullying. Her playmates are avoiding her on the playground. Emily had no friends on her neighborhood because of her attitude problems. Even her nursemaid did not lasts for Emily and just quit for the rebellious of this child. One night, John and Michelle are so worried about their little girl Emily, about the attitude of their child. This problems are discussed by John and Michelle sometimes on night, before they sleep, while Emily is on her own room. On the 1st day of December, the Christmas spirit is everywhere. The nation and every families are all preparing for Christmas and gift giving. Every people are feeling the Christmas spirit and rejoicing including every child. The Christmas lanterns are everywhere. Christmas songs are playing cheerfully, and Santa Clauses are appearing and giving a smile to every child. But John and Michelle are keep on praying to God, for Emily to change her attitude and be a good girl. One night the couple had an idea, and decided to give a punishment to Emily, that they will not give the Christmas present of Emily if she won’t change her attitude and become a good girl. The next day, the couple tell to Emily the consequence if she will not change and continue her bad behavior. Emily is shocked and sad to hear it from her own parents. On the 3rd day of December, theres a miraculous happened to Emily, that she is behaving good. Emily treatment to her nursemaid are impressive that, she look likes a new being that had a good heart. Emily became a sweet child to her parents and others. Emily became friendly while playing on the playground to other childs. John and Michelle seen the miraculous changed to Emily like blessings of heaven above. Untill the Christmas day came, and the family became like there are the happiest persons in this world. Emily since then, became an amatory child and had many friends on the neighborhood and on her school that loving her also. Far from the former Emily.

Critique: The subject is about a little 7 yrs. old girl that had an attitude problems. On this short story there’s a 5 important elements on it. That consist of characters, setting, plot, conflict, and the theme. The style is based on the 5 important elements of the short story. It has a character, a person who takes part in the action of this short story. Setting also on it, that has a time and place which it happens. Plot of a series of events and character actions that relate to the central conflict. Conflict that struggles between characters or things on this short story. Theme that it is the central idea or belief in a short story or lesson that you will gained.

Characters Emily the 7 years old little girl and the protagonist or the main character. John and Michelle the father and mother of Emily.
Setting
Before the Christmas day comes, Emily was a bad girl. When the 1st day of December, the parents of Emily decided to give her punishment. Then the 3rd day of December, the miraculous change happened to Emily.
Plot
Emily parents are called on the guidance counselor office for the complaint of bullying, by Emily. Emily’s playmates are avoiding her because of her attitude. One night parents of Emily discussed the problem about her bad attitude. Until the consequence told to Emily by her parents, if she will not change for good. Then Emily changed before Christmas miraculously, and became a sweet good girl. Far from former bad Emily.
Conflict
Emily is spoiled, doing all she likes, no matter its good or bad. Emily also is a bully on her classroom. There are times that parents of Emily is called on the guidance counselor office for the complaint of bullying of her classmates. Emily has no friend on the neighborhood because of her attitude problems. One night Emily’s parent are so worried about her. Then decided to tell her the consequence if she will not change her bad attitude. Theme There’s a lesson on the story that, you reap what you sown. And there’s a God above us, that can change us, if we believed, pray, and had faith in him.

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