Drugs - Introduction and Conclusion
Introduction and Conclusion
Ignacio Reyes
COM 220
October 05, 2012
Mary Mc Williams
I would start off my paper writing about different types of drugs and the effects it has on society these days. The drugs, the side effects, and how these affect our loved ones. From experience I can say that using drugs and going the wrong way will always bring problems to the table, emotionally and financially. I will also be talking about drugs and where they come from, who the bad people are that sell these drugs to our kids, our friends. I will show statistics from previous years to now, to see how far and what the outcome has been.
Ignacio, show me, don’t tell me about your introduction and conclusion. This is not meant to by a hypothetical exercise, but one in which you actually write an introduction and conclusion for your paper.
For my conclusion, I would paraphrase what I have talked about in the body of my paper into just a couple of sentences. I will reinstate my thesis statement to keep the reader involved in the article. In conclusion, I have talked about the effects of drugs in our society, and what the outcome and problems it makes within our community and our family. I will also conclude that there is a better way instead of using drugs, the best way is to seek an education and try and stay busy instead of going the wrong way about thinking of using drugs.
|Student’s Name: |50 points |Week 6 |Checkpoint: Introduction & Conclusion |
|Assessment |Points available |Points Earned |Comments |
|Introduction |30 | | |
|Introduction attracts reader’s attention (ex.: by |15 |6 |Based on what you are explaining, it sounds like you
Ignacio Reyes
COM 220
October 05, 2012
Mary Mc Williams
I would start off my paper writing about different types of drugs and the effects it has on society these days. The drugs, the side effects, and how these affect our loved ones. From experience I can say that using drugs and going the wrong way will always bring problems to the table, emotionally and financially. I will also be talking about drugs and where they come from, who the bad people are that sell these drugs to our kids, our friends. I will show statistics from previous years to now, to see how far and what the outcome has been.
Ignacio, show me, don’t tell me about your introduction and conclusion. This is not meant to by a hypothetical exercise, but one in which you actually write an introduction and conclusion for your paper.
For my conclusion, I would paraphrase what I have talked about in the body of my paper into just a couple of sentences. I will reinstate my thesis statement to keep the reader involved in the article. In conclusion, I have talked about the effects of drugs in our society, and what the outcome and problems it makes within our community and our family. I will also conclude that there is a better way instead of using drugs, the best way is to seek an education and try and stay busy instead of going the wrong way about thinking of using drugs.
|Student’s Name: |50 points |Week 6 |Checkpoint: Introduction & Conclusion |
|Assessment |Points available |Points Earned |Comments |
|Introduction |30 | | |
|Introduction attracts reader’s attention (ex.: by |15 |6 |Based on what you are explaining, it sounds like you