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DannyFebruary 15, 2010 at 9:27 AM
Thesis : I disagree with Moore because I believe that technology is helping to build romance.
Topic Sentence :
1. Online dating websites help people find their significant other.
2. A conversation over the internet saves embarrassment and awkward silence moments that happen over the phone or in person.
3. Texting helps couples communicate throughout their busy day.
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KathyFebruary 15, 2010 at 9:34 AM
Thesis Paragraph 1 -
Although meant to be for short brief messages,texting has become the new"cool" way of socializing in the world.
Topic Sentence Paragraph 2-
Older People in general were not familiar with the functions of cell phones.
Topic sentence paragraph 3-
What role does texting play in my life? Texting Plays a huge rule in my life and the life of my Acquaintances.
Topic Sentence Paragraph 4-
Texting has become an addiction in my life and others as well.
Thesis sentence Concluding paragraph-
In brief,text messaging plays a big role in the lives ofmy friends and family,I too.
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Patsy x3February 15, 2010 at 9:34 AM
First Essay
Thesis:
As Natalie Moore says in her essay “Rule of Thumbs: Love in the Age of Texting” I also believe that texting plays a bigger role than it should in the lives of many people. I am the perfect example of this because, sometimes my friends and I rather text than talk on the phone or meet up, my boyfriend is obsessed with texting, and I feel like I should ease down on the texting because is taking too much of my time.
Topic Sentences:
1)First of all, texting plays a too big of a role on my life, but I feel like any other college student. My friends and I rather text than talk on the phone or meet up but it has its reasons.
2)Moreover, the fact that my friends and I usually only text is not the biggest of issue when it comes to texting in my life; my boyfriend is obsessed with texting he can be what Moore calls them another “Mr.
DannyFebruary 15, 2010 at 9:27 AM
Thesis : I disagree with Moore because I believe that technology is helping to build romance.
Topic Sentence :
1. Online dating websites help people find their significant other.
2. A conversation over the internet saves embarrassment and awkward silence moments that happen over the phone or in person.
3. Texting helps couples communicate throughout their busy day.
Reply
KathyFebruary 15, 2010 at 9:34 AM
Thesis Paragraph 1 -
Although meant to be for short brief messages,texting has become the new"cool" way of socializing in the world.
Topic Sentence Paragraph 2-
Older People in general were not familiar with the functions of cell phones.
Topic sentence paragraph 3-
What role does texting play in my life? Texting Plays a huge rule in my life and the life of my Acquaintances.
Topic Sentence Paragraph 4-
Texting has become an addiction in my life and others as well.
Thesis sentence Concluding paragraph-
In brief,text messaging plays a big role in the lives ofmy friends and family,I too.
Reply
Patsy x3February 15, 2010 at 9:34 AM
First Essay
Thesis:
As Natalie Moore says in her essay “Rule of Thumbs: Love in the Age of Texting” I also believe that texting plays a bigger role than it should in the lives of many people. I am the perfect example of this because, sometimes my friends and I rather text than talk on the phone or meet up, my boyfriend is obsessed with texting, and I feel like I should ease down on the texting because is taking too much of my time.
Topic Sentences:
1)First of all, texting plays a too big of a role on my life, but I feel like any other college student. My friends and I rather text than talk on the phone or meet up but it has its reasons.
2)Moreover, the fact that my friends and I usually only text is not the biggest of issue when it comes to texting in my life; my boyfriend is obsessed with texting he can be what Moore calls them another “Mr.