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ESSAY #1: In an essay of 300 words or less, please describe how your past circumstances and experiences (such as your upbringing, community, and/or activities) impacted who you are, your future goals, and your choice of major. If you haven't decided on a college or major yet, briefly explain your intentions and aspirations for your first year at Illinois. China, the mysterious eastern land where the booming economy, industries, technology and social welfare could be witnessed everyday, is where I was born and grew up. Cultivated by traditional Chinese culture that put special emphasis on sense of family , I am greatly influenced and shaped by my family.

My father is a teacher and writer who grew up through 1970s and 1980s. At that time, despite the lack of materials and worries about basic necessities, my father kept on getting up at 4 a.m. to trek to school in the nearest town. With his efforts, not only did he achieved excellent scores in the college entrance exam, but also had he spared time to study music (composition). So when it comes to me, my father was very strict in my academic courses. He tutored me as well as cultivated my interest in learning things. Under his guidance, I explored the most suitable learning method for me. Thanks to my father, I determined to make great achievements in future business and life based on academic success. Besides that, my father highly advocated academic spirit that focuses on pragmatic practices and fosters critical thinking. Driven by this idea, he encouraged me to study IB courses and persue more advanced study in the United States.

My mother started her business on her own from the scratch. With her keen observation and communicative skills, she has achieved a great deal in healthcare products. In 1990s, the healthcare products were not so popular in the mainland China since residents were still severely concerned about the huge costs for the medical care. Consequently, the healthcare products that prevent...
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