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Writing an Essay
Give your opinion through an essay on the following statement. Computer games are very bad for people and they cause a lot of problems. Write your essay in 120-180 words in an appropriate style.
Content:
An essay should fully address the points made in the statement, discussing both whether or not computer games are bad for people and the answer of problems that they cause. Range of grammar and vocabulary:

The present simple tense is likely to be required to talk about habits and general facts. Vocabulary connected with habits, leisure time and causes and results is required. Register:
The essay could be fairly formal, informal or neutral, depending on how the candidate wishes to approach the topic.
Organization and cohesion:
The essay should be appropriately divided into paragraphs, separating points that agree with the statement in the questions and points that disagree. Appropriate linking between different points should be used (e.g.: On the other hand).

The reader:
The essay should understand fully the writer’s opinions on the topic and the reasons why the writer has these opinions.
Model answer:
It is true that computer games can be bad for some people. Many of the games are very violent and some people may be influenced by this and then do the violent things themselves.
I also believe that computer games can be additive and this can be bad for people. Some young people, for example, spend too much time playing these games instead of 1

activities that are much healthier for them, such as playing sports. This means that they can become unfit and also that they spend less time talking to their friends and having good relationships with other people.

Playing computer games for long periods of time can also have a bad effect on people psychologically. They can put people into a bad mood and affect their relationships with their friends and family.

On the other hand, computer games are not all bad. People can learn skills from...
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