Travelling Toefl Essay
Eleonora Vaccari 02/05/11
* Travelling to a different country can be both exciting and frustrating at the same time. What are the most important pieces of advice that you would give visitors coming to you country? Give reasons and details to support your response
STRUCTURE
Intro: people travel a lot ->to know different cultures, to try new food, just to relax
Main 1: Be aware of thieves ->they could steal your bag, camera,.. Ex:Rome: subway: I saw thiefs were going though a man’s pocket
Main 2: don’t stay too much under the sun Get fever Ex: my English friend fainted because he sunburned
Conclusion: come to Italy but keep in mind the advices
Nowadays people really travel a lot. There are different reasons, as to know different cultures, to try new foods, to meet friends or relatives which live in another country or just to take some time to relax. However, travelling could be even frustrating if people aren’t familiar with the place they want to go.
About Italy, I think there are two important suggestions people have to take on account.
First of all, they have to be aware of thieves, above all if they’re in a big city, like Milan and Rome. In fact, as in all metropolis, this type of criminality is high and small theft are daily. Bags ,wallets, cameras, watches are the common booty of the thieves. For these reason, I suggest to keep expensive object in a secure place and ensure you can have always under control personal objects. For example, two years ago I went to Rome. While I was sitting in the metro and the train were arriving to the next station, I saw two men stealing a woman’s wallet and then because the door opened, they ran away before that no one could do something to stop them.
Secondly, people don’t have to stay too much under the sun above all during the most dangerous hours of the day(usually between eleven a.m. and 3 p.m.). In Italy the rays are very strong
* Travelling to a different country can be both exciting and frustrating at the same time. What are the most important pieces of advice that you would give visitors coming to you country? Give reasons and details to support your response
STRUCTURE
Intro: people travel a lot ->to know different cultures, to try new food, just to relax
Main 1: Be aware of thieves ->they could steal your bag, camera,.. Ex:Rome: subway: I saw thiefs were going though a man’s pocket
Main 2: don’t stay too much under the sun Get fever Ex: my English friend fainted because he sunburned
Conclusion: come to Italy but keep in mind the advices
Nowadays people really travel a lot. There are different reasons, as to know different cultures, to try new foods, to meet friends or relatives which live in another country or just to take some time to relax. However, travelling could be even frustrating if people aren’t familiar with the place they want to go.
About Italy, I think there are two important suggestions people have to take on account.
First of all, they have to be aware of thieves, above all if they’re in a big city, like Milan and Rome. In fact, as in all metropolis, this type of criminality is high and small theft are daily. Bags ,wallets, cameras, watches are the common booty of the thieves. For these reason, I suggest to keep expensive object in a secure place and ensure you can have always under control personal objects. For example, two years ago I went to Rome. While I was sitting in the metro and the train were arriving to the next station, I saw two men stealing a woman’s wallet and then because the door opened, they ran away before that no one could do something to stop them.
Secondly, people don’t have to stay too much under the sun above all during the most dangerous hours of the day(usually between eleven a.m. and 3 p.m.). In Italy the rays are very strong