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Topic: Reasons why teenagers addicted to facebook
Thesis Statement: Why do teenagers are addicted to facebook? Names: Jerick Monteza
Ruben Dimaunahan
Ivan Dorado

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The most addicting part of Facebook is posting new statuses; uploading new photos; getting attention from people and wanting people to notice your status updates and photos and comment on them. It builds your self-esteem and pride to see many people "like" your status updates and your photos. It makes you feel popular and liked. Facebook addiction, like any addiction, has noticeably detrimental effects. It interferes with a person’s day-to-day life and causes him or her to neglect responsibilities. Bragging is so closely tied to pleasure, it's not surprising that so many of us flock to Facebook to fulfill our crack-like addiction to telling people how great our lives are. According to various researchers, young people and teens have the highest risk for Facebook addiction and make up the largest group of users. This may be due to social pressure or being born at a time when social media is exploding in popularity. Unfortunately, this may make teens and young adults less aware of the dangers of Facebook and internet addiction, because social-technology devices are so commonplace in society today. The format of Facebook allows users to catch up with friends and family with, let's face it, minimal effort. Posts are usually quite short. One quick status update that goes out to all your friends, a short comment on a picture, or a quick "like" and you are done. Relationships that previously would have naturally died can be kept alive on Facebook. 

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