Sample: Writing and Personal Statements

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Most students learn how to write college admission essays, known as personal statements, through sample essays. There are essays that actually provided good examples to guide them in writing personal statements. However, there are sample essays that mislead high school students in writing supposedly good college admission essays, which turn out to be actual samples that were rejected by most colleges and universities all over the U.S. and United Kingdom. Most of these “bad” samples feature plagiarized statements, grammatical errors, and statements written in illustrative figures, like a human out of words. College and university admission committees reject these personal statements not only because they lacked sense of professionalism but also enthusiasm of students who wrote them towards studying their chosen course in their aspired college or university. Bad samples of personal statements are common in high school students because some students find these essays difficult to write in comparison to other ways in seeking admission to college, which are through entrance exams and awarded scholarships. Plagiarism is a main problem when writing these admission essays, especially when students who plagiarized statements from sample essays considered their actions as an easy way out to college admission. Since bad sample essays can become impediments to achieving college education, especially in today’s economic climate, it is important that you avoid the pitfalls provided by bad samples in writing personal statements. Knowing whether a sample college admission essay is good or bad varies by the content and format of the essay. If you are having trouble in making your personal statement original, you can turn to Copyscape or to verify the uniqueness of your essay. To keep your personal statements original, you must adapt or paraphrase the existing sentences or paragraphs from sample essays. Grammatical errors are common in bad sample essays, so if...
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