Plan of Essay
Plan
Discuss the advantages and disadvantage of empowering women so that they can hold other positions apart from their traditional ones.
C- Empowerment of Women
L- Advantages and disadvantages
D- Discuss
Introduction-: Division of labour between gender
Subject – Unequal share of women
Limited Subject-
Issue: Women’s experience in society
Thesis statement- advantages and disadvantages of empowering women
Argument 1 (against) – traditional norms e.g women is to do domestic activities only
Argument 2- (against) – Society layout e.g. roles of men and women
Transition: However, there are advantages of empowering women, political, economical and social effects for women.
Argument 1 (for) – Political benefits…..eg. Enhance political decisions Argument 2 (for)- Economical benefits…eg. more understanding to what happening across the world.
Argument 3 (for) – Social benefits…. 1) decrease population. eg. creating more jobs for women 2) Provide education eg. society awareness
Conclusion
Thesis statement: There are advantages and disadvantages of the empowerment of women for higher positions instead of their traditional ones.
Implication: Development needed for women
Recommendation: More efforts from activists and governments for women
Final thought: Women need to step out and make a change.
The division of labour between genders is a very critical question that still seems a bit unclear. For women, they are the most vulnerable in society, limit access to social power and social value, also for the reason that women’s sexuality and the procreation that limits women’s rights and freedom of action (Women’s Concerns and planning: a methodological approach for their integration into local, regional and national planning, 1986, pg. 10). Many women are in search for a more livelihood society where they can use their skills and talent to gain something useful for the society and
Discuss the advantages and disadvantage of empowering women so that they can hold other positions apart from their traditional ones.
C- Empowerment of Women
L- Advantages and disadvantages
D- Discuss
Introduction-: Division of labour between gender
Subject – Unequal share of women
Limited Subject-
Issue: Women’s experience in society
Thesis statement- advantages and disadvantages of empowering women
Argument 1 (against) – traditional norms e.g women is to do domestic activities only
Argument 2- (against) – Society layout e.g. roles of men and women
Transition: However, there are advantages of empowering women, political, economical and social effects for women.
Argument 1 (for) – Political benefits…..eg. Enhance political decisions Argument 2 (for)- Economical benefits…eg. more understanding to what happening across the world.
Argument 3 (for) – Social benefits…. 1) decrease population. eg. creating more jobs for women 2) Provide education eg. society awareness
Conclusion
Thesis statement: There are advantages and disadvantages of the empowerment of women for higher positions instead of their traditional ones.
Implication: Development needed for women
Recommendation: More efforts from activists and governments for women
Final thought: Women need to step out and make a change.
The division of labour between genders is a very critical question that still seems a bit unclear. For women, they are the most vulnerable in society, limit access to social power and social value, also for the reason that women’s sexuality and the procreation that limits women’s rights and freedom of action (Women’s Concerns and planning: a methodological approach for their integration into local, regional and national planning, 1986, pg. 10). Many women are in search for a more livelihood society where they can use their skills and talent to gain something useful for the society and