Persuasive Essay

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The legal driving age should stay at 16 because more deaths can happen without parental guidance. Legal driving age should stay at 16 years old so there can be parental supervision instead of 18 years old without parental supervision. I think that the legal driving age should stay at 16. The driving age should stay 16 because at 16 the drivers can have parental supervision. The young driver will have lots of guidance. The guidance from the parents will cause them to drive a lot less recless witch can save lives. The young driver will get one on one practice with their parents to teach them what not to do. The young drivers will be able to pick up habbits from there parents. The parents will be able to teach their children how to drive. The parents will be able to watch for bad driving and reinforce good driving skills. Another good thing that comes from parental supervision is that their chilled gets to be eased into responsibility instead of having it pushed onto them. The drivers will not get over wellemed with responsibilitys because their parents will be there to help them out. And finnaly parent supervision will help to make sure that their children follow through with their responsibilitys as a drive. Another reason the driving age should stay 16 is because they will be able to get lots of experience. The young driver will get lots of experience driving alone. The driver would know what to do if something bad happens around them and how to get out of it because of their experience driving alone. The young driver wilkl also learn what not to do and what to do when they get lost because all drivers get lost at some point espetualy young drivers. The young driver will get lots of experience with bad weather conditions. They will know how to drive in snow. They will also know how to drive in rain. They will also get lots of experience driving in high traffic...
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